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Describe a meal you recently had out of your home. v.1

Describe a meal you recently had out of your home. v. 1
Describe a meal you recently had out of your home. You should say: what type of meal it was when you had it who was with you and explain why you took it out of your home. Model Answer 1: Recently I ate buffet at City Night Restaurant with my friends. I had this meal about two weeks ago and we ate buffet in the evening time. That was actually a get together short of a party with my school friends whom I have not met for a long in person. Over the phone, we talked and planned to have a meal cum get together party together to discuss us and to meet those friends in person. We picked the City Night Restaurant because it is in a suitable location for all of us and we knew the food quality of this restaurant was good. We met at around 5 pm and we spent some good time together. Lots of things have changed and some of our friends have done many challenging things and we all enjoyed the stories and updated we gave each other. Four friends of mine from school came to this occasion and they were James, Jessica, Harper and Patrick (. . . or say names of your friends. . . ) It was a gathering we had been planning for a long and as part of our meeting, we planned to have a great feast. From the very beginning, we planned to have met in a restaurant and not at home. Usually arranging to get together type party at a restaurant is easier and more convenient than arranging it at home. No one feels shy or uneasy being at other's home and the host does not have to go through a big preparation. The friends who came at this gathering also liked the environment and foods of City Night Restaurant and that was the main reason we planned to have it outside our home.   Sample Answer 2: Thank you for this excellent cue card topic. It was a barbeque party at night on the rooftop of one of my friend’s home. It was a pleasant surprise for everyone present there as well. In fact, the event turned in to a birthday party for one of my besties. The event was arranged to surprise her, and Jessica was the mastermind of this event. She did not inform us about the party and only just invited us to be on her rooftop for a meal at night. It was a dinner and I took it at night though I reached the spot even before the dusk. The meal and the party were fantastic. To be honest, actually, I forgot that it was the birthday of Samantha. Jessica was the organizer of the entire episode but she kept this a secret. Frequently, we meet her at her home and pass leisurely hours in the rooftop of her residence. So, she invited almost everyone including Mary (the birthday girl), me, Alvina, Anny, Amey, and Celia. We all had fun together and enjoyed the meals too. But the most surprising event was for Mary. She did not expect such a blast on this day. Usually, I do not take foods out of my home except some special cases. It was one of such cases and I participated in the party with my friends. Besides, Jessica also tempted and allured us all with the name of some special dishes like barbeque chicken, fried rice, soft beverage, grilled fish etc. The menu was really attractive. And there was another reason that I had been passing some busy moments with my academic studies. So, I needed a break and the meal invitation brought the desired break for me. Considering all the matters, I decided to take the meal out of my home.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: 1. Describe a meal you recently enjoyed. 2. Describe a party you recently had. 3. Describe a get-together party with your school friends. 4. Describe a meal you enjoyed outside your home.
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Describe
a
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meal
you
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recently
had out of your home. You should say: what type of
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meal
it was when you had it who was with you and
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explain
why you took it out of your home. Model Answer
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1: Recently
I
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ate
buffet at City
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Night
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with my
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friends
. I had this
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meal
about two weeks
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ago and
we
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buffet in the evening time. That was
actually
a
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get
together short of a
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party
with my school
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friends
whom I have not met for a long in person. Over the phone, we talked and
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planned
to have a
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meal
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cum
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get
together
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together to discuss us and to
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meet
those
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friends
in person. We picked the City
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Night
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because
it is in a suitable location for all of
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us and
we knew the food quality of this
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restaurant
was
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good
. We met at around 5
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pm and
we spent
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some
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good
time together. Lots of things have
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changed
and
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some
of our
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friends
have done
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many
challenging
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things and
we all
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enjoyed
the stories and updated we gave each other. Four
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friends
of mine from school came to this
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occasion and
they were James, Jessica, Harper and Patrick (.
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or
say names of your
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friends
.
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)
It was a gathering we had been planning for a long and as part of our meeting, we
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planned
to have a great feast. From the
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very
beginning, we
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planned
to have met in a
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restaurant
and not at home.
Usually
arranging to
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get
together type
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party
at a
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restaurant
is easier and more convenient than arranging it at home. No one feels shy or uneasy being at other's home and the host does not
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have to
go through a
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big
preparation. The
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friends
who came at this gathering
also
liked the environment and foods of City
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Night
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Restaurant
and that was the main reason we
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planned
to have it outside our home.
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Sample Answer 2:

Thank you for this excellent
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card
topic. It was a
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barbeque
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party
at
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night
on the rooftop of one of my
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friend’s
home. It was a pleasant surprise for everyone present there as
well
. In fact, the
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event
turned in to a birthday
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party
for one of my besties. The
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event
was arranged
to surprise her, and Jessica was the mastermind of this
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event
. She did not inform us about the
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party
and
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only
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just
invited us to be on her rooftop for a
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meal
at
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night
. It was a dinner and I took it at
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night
though I reached the spot even
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before
the dusk. The
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meal
and the
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party
were fantastic.

To be honest,
actually
, I forgot that it was the birthday of Samantha. Jessica was the organizer of the entire episode
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but
she
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kept
this a secret.
Frequently
, we
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meet
her at her home and pass
leisurely
hours in the rooftop of her residence.
So
, she invited almost everyone including Mary (the birthday girl), me,
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Alvina
,
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Anny
,
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Amey
, and Celia. We all had fun together and
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enjoyed
the
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meals
too.
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But
the most surprising
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event
was for Mary. She did not
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expect
such a blast on this day.

Usually
, I do not take foods out of my home except
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some
special cases. It was one of such cases and I participated in the
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party
with my
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friends
.
Besides
, Jessica
also
tempted and allured us all with the name of
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some
special dishes like
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barbeque
chicken, fried rice, soft beverage, grilled fish etc. The menu was
really
attractive. And there was another reason that I had been passing
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some
busy moments with my academic studies.
So
, I needed a break and the
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meal
invitation brought the desired break for me. Considering all the matters, I decided to take the
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meal
out of my home.
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would enable you to talk about the following
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: 1.
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Describe
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meal
you
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recently
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enjoyed. 2
.
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you
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had.

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Describe
a
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-together
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party
with your school
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friends. 4
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Describe
a
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meal
you
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enjoyed
outside your home.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
74Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a meal you recently had out of your home. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
8 paragraphs
696 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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