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Describe something you want to do in the future. v.1

Describe something you want to do in the future. v. 1
Describe something you want to do in the future. You should say: what is it when you want to do it how you want to achieve it and explain why you want to do it.   Model Answer 1: There are so many things in life to do and see except, of course, the problem is that we just don’t have “unlimited” time in our hands. However, as far as I am concerned, I think that I have already figured out what I really want to do in the future. “Traveling”, and only more and more travelling is what I want to do in the future in the next 20 years or so before I completely retire from the professional world except, of course, the problem is we can’t really move even an inch in these days and eras without money. So, the plan, for now, is to work as hard as possible and save up as much money as possible also at the same time. Of course, the good thing is I have already decided what I really want to take as my profession, which is to start a small business, as I have never really felt good about having “9 am to 5 pm” kind of job for the rest of my life. Besides, owning a business firm allows a person to take a certain level of calculated risk and liberty to earn money in a legal way which may not always be possible if we have a “regular” job. So, anyway, having my own business is what I want to do, not only to earn a living but also learning/reading about different countries, so that I know exactly which places are good for travelling. I want to travel around the world mainly because I have long, from my childhood, been fascinated by different cultures, traditions, religions and lifestyles, and there is no better way, in my humble opinion, to learn about them without travelling extensively. Besides, travelling to different places has always made me feel relaxed and recuperate from the monotonous life of our daily hectic work schedule. Finally, travelling just might also allow me to explore into the possibilities of even further business opportunities so that I can actually earn more money while doing the travelling also at the same time.   Sample Answer 2: Everybody has a plan for the future. Though the future is uncertain and many times unpredictable, I believe that to some extent our future depends on our actions on past and present. In the future, I want to run a mega shopping mall business where my involvement would not be mandatory to run the daily business and I would enjoy my time by visiting different places of the world. After I finished my graduation, I started working for a small company. Now I am working for a large multinational company I have planned to work till I become 36 and then I will take early retirement. The money I will inherit and the amount I am currently saving per month should allow me to start a business. I have planned to start a big shopping mall. I will have my close relatives as the employees and authorities of the business and initially, I will work in this shopping mall for 2-3 years to make it run smoothly. When the business would go on with its own path, I will enjoy my vacation and would visit different renowned and beautiful cities of the world. I will visit Asia, Europe, Russia and many more places. Hopefully, I will enjoy retirement and trips. Though I am not sure about the future, I have already planned for it. Because I believe proper planning and initiation is half of the total task and fulfilling dream. I have already taken some steps towards achieving my future plan.   Tips for answering this Cue Card Questions: You can mention what you want to do anytime in the future. This topic has not asked what you would do after you get 50 or so. For this, you can even talk about things you are planning to do in the near future. A very good answer to this topic can be "I want to go to a foreign country to finish my Masters and PhD from a reputed university and then return to my country and start a business/ to do a job. Following are some of the ideas for you to pick from to answer this topic: I will migrate to a foreign country and start my career there. I will run a small business in my hometown. I will establish a school in my hometown. I will retire early and visit different places. I will fully spend my time with my family members and would get involved in farming. I will start a job and would work as an executive. I will purchase a house in my hometown and would start living there.   If you prepare for this cue card topic you should be able to answer the following cue card topics also: 1. Describe your future plan. 2. Describe what you will do after your retirement. 3. Describe a thing that you want to do in the future. 4. Talk about your plan for a business. 5. Describe what you want to do in the future. 6. Describe one of your dreams. 7. Describe a plan you have.
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Describe
something you
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want
to do in the
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future
. You should say: what is it when you
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want
to do it how you
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want
to achieve it and
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explain
why you
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want
to do it.
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Model
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Answer
1:

There are
so
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many
things in life to do and
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see
except,
of course
, the problem is that we
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just
don’t have “unlimited”
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time
in our hands.
However
, as far as I
am concerned
, I
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think
that I have
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already
figured out what I
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really
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want
to do in the future.

“Traveling”, and
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only
more and more
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travelling
is what I
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want
to do in the
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future
in the
next
20 years or
so
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before
I completely retire from the professional world except,
of course
, the problem is we can’t
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really
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move
even an inch in these days and eras without
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money
.
So
, the
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plan
, for
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now
, is to
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work
as
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hard
as possible and save up as much
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money
as possible
also
at the same
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time
.
Of course
, the
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good
thing is I have
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already
decided what I
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really
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want
to take as my profession, which is to
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start
a
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small
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business
, as I have never
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really
felt
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good
about having “9 am to 5 pm” kind of job for the rest of my life.
Besides
, owning a
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business
firm
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allows
a person to take a certain level of calculated
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risk
and liberty to earn
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money
Consider replacing "in a legal way" with the adverb for "legal"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a legal way
which may not always be possible if we have a “regular” job.
So
,
anyway
, having my
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own
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business
is what I
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want
to do, not
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only
to earn a living
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but
also
learning/reading about
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different
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countries
,
so
that I know exactly which
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places
are
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good
for travelling.

I
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want
to travel around the world
mainly
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because
I have long, from my childhood,
been fascinated
by
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different
cultures, traditions, religions and lifestyles, and there is no better way, in my humble opinion, to learn about them without
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travelling
extensively
.
Besides
,
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travelling
to
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different
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places
has always made me feel relaxed and recuperate from the monotonous life of our daily hectic
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work
schedule.
Finally
,
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travelling
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just
might
also
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allow
me to explore into the possibilities of even
further
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business
opportunities
so
that I can
actually
earn more
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money
while doing the
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travelling
also
at the same
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time
.
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Sample
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Answer
2:

Everybody has a
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plan
for the
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future
. Though the
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future
is uncertain and
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many
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times
unpredictable, I believe that to
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some
extent our
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future
depends on our actions on past and present. In the
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future
, I
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want
to
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run
a mega shopping mall
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business
where my involvement would not be mandatory to
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run
the daily
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business
and I would enjoy my
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time
by visiting
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different
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places
of the world.

After I finished my graduation, I
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started
working for a
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small
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company
.
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Now
I am working for a large multinational
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company
I have planned to
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work
till I become 36 and then I will take early retirement. The
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money
I will inherit and the amount I am
currently
saving per month should
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allow
me to
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start
a
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business
. I have planned to
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start
a
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big
shopping mall. I will have my close relatives as the employees and authorities of the
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business
and
initially
, I will
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work
in this shopping mall for 2-3 years to
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make
it
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run
smoothly
. When the
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business
would go on with its
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own
path, I will enjoy my vacation and would visit
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different
renowned and
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beautiful
cities of the world. I will visit Asia, Europe, Russia and
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many
more places.

Hopefully
, I will enjoy retirement and trips. Though I am not sure about the
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future
, I have
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already
planned for it.
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Because
I believe proper planning and initiation is half of the total task and fulfilling dream. I have
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already
taken
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some
steps towards achieving my
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future
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plan
.
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Tips for answering this Cue Card Questions: You can mention what you
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want
to do anytime in the
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future
. This
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topic
has not asked what you would do after you
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get
50 or
so
. For this, you can even talk about things you are planning to do in the near
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future
. A
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very
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good
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answer
to this
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topic
can be
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"
I
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want
to go to a foreign
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country
to finish my Masters and PhD from a reputed university and then return to my
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country
and
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start
a business/ to do a job.

Following are
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some of the
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ideas
for you to pick from to
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answer
this
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topic
: I will migrate to a foreign
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country
and
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start
my career there. I will
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run
a
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small
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business
in my hometown. I will establish a school in my hometown.
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I
will retire early and visit
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different
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places
.
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I
will
fully
spend my
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time
with my family members and would
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get
involved in farming.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will
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start
a job and would
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work
as an executive.
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I
will
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purchase
a
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house
in my hometown and would
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start
living there.
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If you prepare for this cue card
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topic
you should be able to
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answer
the following cue card
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topics
also
:

1.
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Describe
your
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future
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plan. 2
.
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Describe
what you will do after your retirement.

3.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a thing that you
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want
to do in the
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future. 4
. Talk about your
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plan
for a
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business. 5
.
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Describe
what you
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want
to do in the
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future. 6
.
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Describe
one of your dreams.

7.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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plan
you have.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
119Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe something you want to do in the future. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
15 paragraphs
902 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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