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Describe something special you want to buy in the future. v.1

Describe something special you want to buy in the future. v. 1
Describe something special you want to buy in the future. You should say:  what it is  what it is used for  when you intend to buy it  and explain why you want to buy it. Follow-up Questions: What makes things to be special to you? What makes a brand trustworthy? What are some of the famous costume brands in your country? What electronic devices are more common in your city?   Sample Answer 1: I wish that I had a lot of money so that I would be able to buy a lot of “special” things, but unfortunately, I don’t really see that happening soon. But, I guess that I could still talk about at least one “special” thing, which I would really want to buy in the future. I am talking about buying a computer desk. In fact, I have been planning to buy a perfect computer desk for quite sometimes, but I am not buying “perfect” looking computer desk just yet because my family is about to remodel my room, along with the rest of the house, and I want to make sure that my computer desk matches the interior design and painting of my room. So, as soon as my room gets a new model and painting after a couple of months, I will go ahead and buy my computer desk, which I want to use, mainly, to keep my desktop computer. My computer desk should be about five feet wide, two and a half feet deep, and the knee space under the desk should about 2 feet high.   Having a perfect L-shape design, the computer desk should preferably be made of solid wood and should also have a nice “Carolina oak” finish. Of course, I wouldn’t mind any other “finish”, but it has to be very “unique” and appealing. Finally, it should also feature a sliding drawer for keyboard storage and two drawers for additional storage on each surface of the “specially designed” computer desk. Anyway, I want to buy this particular piece of furniture, primarily because my old computer desk is getting “old and obsolete”. Besides, my old computer desk is not spacious enough for my rather large desktop computer. On top of that, I am planning to buy this beautiful piece of new furniture also because I want to be able to give my “newly-remodelled” room a new look. Finally, and most importantly, I also want to buy this special computer desk because I want to be able to feel comfortable physically in an “ergonomic” way while working on it.
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Describe
something
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special
you
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want
to
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buy
in the future. You should say:
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what it is
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what it is
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used
for
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when you intend to
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buy
it
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and
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explain
why you
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want
to
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buy
it. Follow-up Questions: What
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makes
things to be
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special
to you? What
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makes
a brand trustworthy? What are
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some of the
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famous
costume brands in your country?
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What
electronic devices are more common in your city?
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Sample Answer 1:

I wish that I had
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a lot of
money
so
that I would be able to
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buy
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a lot of
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“special”
things,
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but
unfortunately, I don’t
really
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see
that happening
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soon
.
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But
,
I guess
that I could
still
talk about at least one
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“special”
thing, which I would
really
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want
to
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buy
in the future.

I am talking about buying a computer
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desk
. In fact, I have been planning to
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buy
a perfect computer
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desk
for quite
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sometimes
,
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but
I am not buying “perfect” looking computer
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desk
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just
yet
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because
my family is about to remodel my room, along with the rest of the
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house
, and I
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want
to
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make
sure that my computer
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desk
matches the interior design and painting of my room.

So
, as
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soon
as my room
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gets
a new model and painting after a couple of months, I will go ahead and
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buy
my computer
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desk
, which I
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want
to
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use
,
mainly
, to
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keep
my desktop computer. My computer
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desk
should be about five feet wide, two and a half feet deep, and the knee space under the
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desk
should about
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2 feet
high.
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Having a perfect L-shape design, the computer
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desk
should
preferably
be made
of solid wood and should
also
have a nice “Carolina oak” finish.
Of course
, I wouldn’t mind any other “finish”,
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but
it
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has to
be
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very
“unique” and appealing.
Finally
, it should
also
feature a sliding drawer for keyboard storage and two drawers for additional storage on each surface of the “
specially
designed” computer desk.

Anyway
, I
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want
to
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buy
this particular piece of furniture,
primarily
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because
my
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old
computer
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desk
is getting “
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old
and obsolete”.
Besides
, my
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old
computer
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desk
is not spacious
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enough
for my
rather
large desktop computer.
On top of that
, I am planning to
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buy
this
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beautiful
piece of new furniture
also
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because
I
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want
to be able to give my “
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newly-remodelled
” room a new look.
Finally
, and most
importantly
, I
also
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want
to
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buy
this
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special
computer
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desk
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I
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want
to be able to feel comfortable
physically
in an “ergonomic” way while working on it.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe something special you want to buy in the future. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
427 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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