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Describe something important you have learned recently. v.1

Describe something important you have learned recently. v. 1
Describe something important you have learned recently. You should say: what you have learned where you learned it from how important the lesson was and explain what impact this has on your mind. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer: We, as human, constantly learn and this knowledge and our life experiences shape who we become or choose to become. Pretty recently, I have learned about something called "minimalism" from a documentary on TV and it was entertaining and thought-provoking. I would like to thank you for the opportunity to let me talk about it. "Minimalism" is not about becoming a hermit in a jungle or giving away everything we have. Rather it's a concept that allows us to focus on more important aspects of life by breaking the chain of gaining and owing more and more. Statistically speaking, we are living in a rich era of affluence and prosperity and yet we are slaves to our desire of material gain and success that seems unattainable due to our changing goals and social pressure. We are living lives defined by capitalism and the corporate world and have little time to focus on what is truly important in our life like our family and friends, neighbours, relationship, peace and happiness. "Minimalism" thus tells us to get rid of things we do not need like three smartphones, 30 pairs of shoes and closet full of designers clothes and focus on what makes us happy. I learned it from a TV documentary that I watched a few weeks ago and it was a top-class production. The way it was presented, the speakers who talked about it and the way it was made are simply outstanding. It was not just another TV shows or movies that we often forget about just after watching it. It was deep and it covered an unpopular topics that people usually tend to avoid thinking about. The impact of the concept that it has had on me is tremendous. I no longer feel bad because I don't own the latest car or don't earn a six-figure salary. I have been thinking about the messages this documentary tried to gave us and it was astounding. I have started focusing on being happier and spending quality time with people I care and people who care about me rather than feeling bad about all the things I don't have. Minimalism teaches about being happier with less because it's alway quality that counts, not the quantity.
Describe
something
important
you have
learned
recently. You should say: what you have
learned
where you
learned
it from how
important
the lesson was and
explain
what impact this has on your mind. [You will
have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
 
Model Answer:

We, as human,
constantly
learn and this knowledge and our life experiences shape who we become or choose to become. Pretty recently, I have
learned
about something called
"
minimalism
"
from a documentary on TV and it was entertaining and
thought
-provoking. I would like to thank you for the opportunity to
let
me talk about it.

"
Minimalism
"
is not about becoming a hermit in a jungle or giving away everything we have.
Rather
it's a concept that
allows
us to focus on more
important
aspects of life by breaking the chain of gaining and owing more and more.
Statistically
speaking, we are living in a rich era of affluence and
prosperity and
yet
we are slaves to our desire of material gain and success that seems unattainable due to our changing goals and social pressure. We are living
lives
defined by capitalism and the corporate world and have
little
time to focus on what is
truly
important
in our life like our family and friends,
neighbours
, relationship, peace and happiness.
"
Minimalism
"
thus
tells
us to
get
rid of things we do not need
like
three smartphones, 30 pairs of shoes and closet full of designers clothes and focus on what
makes
us happy.

I
learned
it from a TV documentary that I
watched
a few weeks ago and it was a top-
class
production. The way it
was presented
, the speakers who talked about it and the way it
was made
are
simply
outstanding. It was not
just
another TV
shows
or movies that we
often
forget about
just
after watching it. It was deep and it covered an unpopular
topics
that
people
usually
tend to avoid thinking about.

The impact of the concept that it has had on me is tremendous. I no longer feel
bad
because
I don't
own
the latest car or don't earn a six-figure salary. I have been thinking about the messages this documentary tried to
gave
us and it was astounding.
I
have
started
focusing on being happier and spending quality time with
people
I care and
people
who care about me
rather
than feeling
bad
about all the things I don't have. Minimalism teaches about being happier with less
because
it's
alway
quality that counts, not the quantity.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe something important you have learned recently. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
447 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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