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Describe something that you have learned recently from the Internet. v.1

Describe something that you have learned recently from the Internet. v. 1
Describe something that you have learned recently from the Internet. You should say: what it was how you found out about this would you recommend this to your friends and explain whether it is important to you. Model Answer 1: The Internet is perhaps the most wonderful and helpful modern invention that has touched the lives of billions. This worldwide network has not only revolutionised the way we communicate, shop or exchange information but has also changed the way people learn new things, teach others, do travel plans, get enrolled in a course and so on. I personally thank you for the opportunity you gave me to talk about something I have recently learned from the Internet. In fact, I use the Internet almost every day and learn new things quite often. One of the things I have recently learned  is how to reuse the ordinary plastic bottles we throw away almost  every day. While surfing the Internet, I found that one of my friends has shared a video that shows different utilities of the plastic water bottles and soft-dring bottles. the creator of the video called it a lifehack and uploaded this video on YouTube. From YouTube, this friend of mine shared it on his Facebook account. It was 15-16 minutes video and I was quite amazed by the idea and genius behind this video. Recommending something that I like with my friends has become quite easier these days. I only need to press a button or click the mouse to share a content with my friends. In fact, just after I watched it, I have shared this video with my Facebook, Google+ and Twitter friends. As I find this video and its content helpful, I would definitely recommend it to my friends. As I have already told, the idea behind this video was quite remarkable and this has taught me something that I never thought would be possible. The video was professionally made and it was easier to follow the process described in this video. I was quite astonished how a simple plastic bottle could be turned into so many useful things. I watched this video several times and found that it showed 20 handy utilities of plastic bottles including how to make these. I  learned how to make a plant pot, soap bottle, basket, napkin holder, kind's pencil holder, leaf lamp, piggie bank, decorative container, jewellery stand, bird feeder, hanging-chandelier and many other handy things out of the ordinary plastic bottles. Learning how to upcycle plastic bottles to make those handy and beautiful things was very important to me. Up until I learned how to upcycle the plastic bottles, I mostly threw away those bottles and never thought about their practical use. Now I have made two holders for my small plants, a piggie bank, a bird feeder and a pencil holder and I felt an enormous pleasure in making them. I will try making other things that were demonstrated in this video. Such crafty works, I believe, foster our creativity, hones our skills and saves money. The utmost pleasure I can feel when I successfully make something useful from an ordinary plastic bottle is unparallel. This is quite important to me due to its practical usefulness and creative processes. I would definitely watch similar video and tutorials and learn such skills more in the future. Sample Answer 2: This is the age of technology. By dint of the technological advancement, people are moving ahead. Outsourcing is one of the wonders of the technological advancement that is making people independent in all terms. In the present age, the world is a global village. Distance is not a barrier now to work from a different country. So, the number of offshore employees is on the rise. It has happened for the improvement of technology. People now can communicate easily even at the distant part of the world. As a result, when the youths do not get jobs in their native lands, they are moving for freelancing. It is also known as outsourcing. They work sitting at home and get paid at the end of their projects. Earlier, I was unaware of the issue. Though I heard about freelancing, I did not have a clear idea until I searched the issue on the internet. I am a middle-aged man and been engaged in a personal business here in Mozambique. I own a medium-sized restaurant and also a small coffee shop. So, I was not that much familiar with the technological advancements. But now I need to explore the virtual arena for some reasons. I needed a software to maintain my restaurant accounts and started using the internet to know about it. Later I started browsing the internet and came to know about a lot of things and information that I did not know before. Gradually, I learnt about the freelancing issues and how the service is provided. There is a wide range of scopes to work as a freelancer. But for this, people need to have some sort of special set of skills like designing a web page, skills with photo editing, writing capacity and more. Of course, I will recommend it to my friends. This is really an interesting thing to share. Many of my friends are not well versed with the technology. Even some of them are unaware of using computers while I am a bit different from them. So, if I share the information with them, they might be beneficial. They might grow the interest on the internet and will try to start some sort of outsourcing after their qualifications. In fact, all of my friends, including me, are moderately educated but we lack the knowledge of computer and internet. So, the issue of freelancing was unfamiliar with us. Recently my contact with the internet has made it clearer and I want all my friends also should know about the vastness of the internet. This is really an important aspect for me. I want to know the entire world and the internet is the best possible thing that can help me for this purpose. Besides, there are potentials to generate income as well. Considering all the aspects, it appears that the freelancing is really an important issue for me. But I need sometimes to get skilled over the specific sectors I need to work. I can paint very well and I think if I learn graphics design, I could shine in the arena. As a fresh internet user, it may take time for me to master the skills but I will be patient to reach my goal.
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Describe
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something
that you have
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learned
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recently
from the Internet. You should say: what it was how you found out about this would you recommend this to your
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friends
and
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explain
whether it is
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important
to you. Model Answer 1:

The Internet is perhaps the most wonderful and helpful modern invention that has touched the
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lives
of billions. This worldwide network has not
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only
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revolutionised
the way we communicate, shop or exchange information
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but
has
also
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changed
the way
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people
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learn
new things, teach others, do travel plans,
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get
enrolled in a course and
so
on. I
personally
thank you for the opportunity you gave me to talk about
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something
I have
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recently
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learned
from the Internet.

In fact, I
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use
the Internet almost every day and
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learn
new things
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quite
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often
. One of the things I have
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recently
learned
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is how to reuse the ordinary
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plastic
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bottles
we throw away almost
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every day. While surfing the Internet, I found that one of my
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friends
has shared a
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video
that
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shows
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different
utilities of the
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plastic
water
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bottles
and
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soft-dring
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bottles
.
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the
creator of the
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video
called it a
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lifehack
and uploaded this
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video
on YouTube. From YouTube, this
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friend
of mine shared it on his Facebook account. It was 15-16 minutes
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video and
I was
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quite
amazed by the
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idea
and genius behind this video.

Recommending
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something
that I like with my
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friends
has become
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quite
easier these days. I
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only
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need
to press a button or click the mouse to share a content with my
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friends
. In fact,
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just
after I
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watched
it, I have shared this
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video
with my Facebook, Google+ and Twitter
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friends
. As I find this
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video
and its content helpful, I would definitely recommend it to my friends.

As I have already
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told
, the
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idea
behind this
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video
was
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quite
remarkable and this has taught me
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something
that I never
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thought
would be possible. The
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video
was
professionally
made and it was easier to follow the process
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described
in this
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video
. I was
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quite
astonished how a simple
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plastic
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bottle
could
be turned
into
so
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many
useful things. I
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watched
this
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video
several times and found that it
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showed
20 handy utilities of
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plastic
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bottles
including how to
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make
these.
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I
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learned
how to
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make
a plant pot, soap
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bottle
, basket, napkin
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holder
, kind's pencil
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holder
, leaf lamp,
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piggie
bank, decorative container,
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jewellery
stand, bird feeder, hanging-chandelier and
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many
other handy things out of the ordinary
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plastic
bottles.

Learning how to
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upcycle
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plastic
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bottles
to
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make
those handy and
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beautiful
things was
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very
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important
to me. Up until I
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learned
how to
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upcycle
the
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plastic
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bottles
, I
mostly
threw away those
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bottles
and never
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thought
about their practical
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use
.
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Now
I have made two
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holders
for my
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small
plants, a
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piggie
bank, a bird feeder and a pencil
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holder
and I felt an enormous pleasure in making them. I will try making other things that
were demonstrated
in this
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video
. Such crafty works, I believe, foster our creativity, hones our
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skills
and saves money. The utmost pleasure I can feel when I
successfully
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make
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something
useful from an ordinary
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plastic
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bottle
is
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unparallel
. This is
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quite
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important
to me due to its practical usefulness and creative processes. I would definitely
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watch
similar
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video
and tutorials and
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learn
such
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skills
more in the future.

Sample Answer 2:

This is the age of technology. By dint of the technological advancement,
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people
are moving ahead. Outsourcing is one of the wonders of the technological advancement
that is
making
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people
independent in all terms.

In the present age, the world is a global village. Distance is not a barrier
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now
to
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work
from a
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different
country.
So
, the number of offshore employees is on the rise. It has happened for the improvement of technology.
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People
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now
can communicate
easily
even at the distant part of the world.
As a result
, when the youths do not
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get
jobs in their native lands, they are moving for
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freelancing
. It is
also
known as outsourcing. They
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work
sitting at home and
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get
paid at the
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end
of their projects. Earlier, I was unaware of the
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issue
. Though I heard about
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freelancing
, I did not have a
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clear
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idea
until I searched the
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issue
on the internet.

I am a middle-aged
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man
and
been engaged
in a personal business here in Mozambique. I
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own
a medium-sized restaurant and
also
a
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small
coffee shop.
So
, I was not that much familiar with the technological advancements.
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But
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now
I
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need
to explore the virtual arena for
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some
reasons. I needed a software to maintain my restaurant accounts and
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started
using the internet to
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know
about it. Later I
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started
browsing the internet and came to
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know
about
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a lot of
things and information that I did not
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know
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before
.
Gradually
, I
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learnt
about the
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freelancing
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issues
and how the service
is provided
. There is a wide range of scopes to
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work
as a freelancer.
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But
for this,
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people
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need
to have
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some
sort of special set of
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skills
like designing a web page,
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skills
with photo editing, writing capacity and more.

Of course
, I will recommend it to my
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friends
. This is
really
an interesting thing to share.
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Many
of my
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friends
are not
well
versed with the technology. Even
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some
of them are unaware of using computers while I am a bit
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different
from them.
So
, if I share the information with them, they might be beneficial. They might grow the interest on the internet and will try to
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start
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some
sort of outsourcing after their qualifications. In fact, all of my
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friends
, including me, are
moderately
educated
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but
we lack the knowledge of computer and internet.
So
, the
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issue
of
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freelancing
was unfamiliar with us.
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Recently
my contact with the internet has made it clearer and I want all my
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friends
also
should
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know
about the vastness of the internet.

This is
really
an
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important
aspect for me. I want to
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know
the entire world and the internet is the best possible thing that can
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help
me for this purpose.
Besides
, there are potentials to generate income as
well
. Considering all the aspects, it appears that the
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freelancing
is
really
an
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important
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issue
for me.
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But
I
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need
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sometimes
to
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get
skilled over the specific sectors I
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need
to
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work
. I can paint
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very
well
and I
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think
if I
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learn
graphics design, I could shine in the arena. As a fresh internet user, it may take time for me to master the
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skills
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but
I will be patient to reach my goal.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
115Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe something that you have learned recently from the Internet. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
12 paragraphs
1101 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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