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Describe something expensive you have purchased recently. v.1

Describe something expensive you have purchased recently. v. 1
Describe something expensive you have purchased recently. You should say: what it is and when you have purchased it whether you saved money for that where you purchased it from and explain why you purchased it.
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Describe
something expensive you have
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purchased
recently. You should say: what it is and when you have
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purchased
it whether you saved money for that where you
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purchased
it from and
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explain
why you
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purchased
it.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe something expensive you have purchased recently. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
36 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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