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Describe a street that you know well. v.1

Describe a street that you know well. v. 1
Describe a street that you know well. You should say: where the street is located what types of establishments the street has how often you go there and explain why you visit there and how well you know this place.   Model Answer 1: Everything in the city, in which I live, is supposed to be familiar to me because I have been living in this city for a long period of time. But, apparently, this doesn’t seem to be so because I am finding the job of describing a street, which I am supposed to know well, a bit more challenging than I had initially thought for some unknown reasons. So, was I wrong all along about knowing my city? Anyway, the city, I am going to try to describe, is one of the major streets in the large neighbourhood, where I live. It runs east-west and stretches about one and a half kilometres. If I have got proper information about this street, it was one of the oldest streets in the city as well. In fact, it was made in the very early days of the city’s expansion, and perhaps, that’s why most buildings, which are standing on both sides of this street, look old. Of course, there are also few shops here and there in between the buildings as well as an elementary school for the kids, but the sheer number of the buildings on this street suggest that many families and people live in that part of the neighbourhood. Luckily, this is a rather wide street, and therefore, even though, it remains fairly busy with all sorts of private and public vehicles, it doesn’t seem to be as congested as a number of other streets in my city. Paved with high-quality concrete, this street connects a couple of major roads which are used to make an exit from our city premise. Anyway, I visit the street and the place at least once a week, because I use it to go to my uncle’s house, who lives on the other side of my city. Besides, I know this place really well because I attended the elementary school there for a couple of years. In fact, I know this place so well that I still remember how most of the old trees there were cut to make room for building new houses a long time ago.   Sample Answer 2: I would like to describe a street from my hometown where I spent a lot of time in my childhood and adolescence time. This street is called grace street (. . . say the name of a street you know about. . . ) and it is at the back side of the high school we used to study at. This is not a very wide street and since it is on the back side, people often avoid this road and take the main street. There are some 2-3 storied buildings there and one 7th storied building is situated beside this street. A large portion of the street-side is occupied by the high school and there is a pond, 2 lamp posts, one post office and 2 small tea stalls are situated beside this street. I used to visit this street and spent time with my friends in my teenage time mostly. Since I now live in a different city I rarely visit this street. However, I go to this street sometimes with my friends whenever I visit my hometown. This is the place where I spend my time with my friends in the evening when I stay in my hometown. I go to my hometown 3-4 times in a year and visit this street each time I visit my hometown. I like this street because I have so many memories related to this street. I still go there whenever I visit my town. And this very street where I used to spend some of my golden periods reminds me of my old time there. Being there with my friends sometimes reminds me of things I used to do there and how precious the time was. For these reasons, I like this street very much.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a street or place in your hometown. Describe a busy street in your city. Describe a place you often go to. Describe a place where you often hang around with your friends. Describe a memorable place. Describe a street or park where you often played.
Describe
a
street
that you
know
well
. You should say: where the
street
is located
what types of establishments the
street
has how
often
you go there and
explain
why you
visit
there and how
well
you
know
this
place
.
 
Model Answer 1:

Everything in the city, in which I
live
,
is supposed
to be familiar to me
because
I have been living in this city for a long period of
time
.
But
,
apparently
, this doesn’t seem to be
so
because
I am finding the job of describing a
street
, which I
am supposed
to
know
well
, a bit more challenging than I had
initially
thought
for
some
unknown reasons.
So
, was I
wrong
all along about knowing my city?

Anyway
, the city, I am going to try to
describe
, is one of the major
streets
in the large
neighbourhood
, where I
live
. It runs east-west and stretches about one and a half
kilometres
. If I have
got
proper information about this
street
, it was one of the oldest
streets
in the city as
well
. In fact, it
was made
in the
very
early days of the city’s expansion, and perhaps, that’s why most
buildings
, which are standing on both
sides
of this
street
, look
old
.
Of course
, there are
also
few shops here and there in between the
buildings
as
well
as an elementary
school
for the kids,
but
the sheer number of the
buildings
on this
street
suggest that
many
families and
people
live
in that part of the
neighbourhood
.

Luckily, this is a
rather
wide
street
, and
therefore
,
even though
, it remains
fairly
busy with all sorts of private and public vehicles, it doesn’t seem to be as congested as a number of other
streets
in my city. Paved with high-quality concrete, this
street
connects a couple of major roads which are
used
to
make
an exit from our city premise.

Anyway
, I
visit
the
street
and the
place
at least once a week,
because
I
use
it to go to my uncle’s
house
, who
lives
on the other side of my city.
Besides
, I
know
this
place
really
well
because
I attended the elementary
school
there for a couple of years. In fact, I
know
this
place
so
well
that I
still
remember how most of the
old
trees there were
cut
to
make
room for
building
new
houses
a long
time
ago.
 
Sample Answer 2:

I would like to
describe
a
street
from my
hometown
where I spent
a lot of
time
in my childhood and adolescence
time
. This
street
is called
grace
street
(.
.
.
say
the name of a
street
you
know
about.
.
.
)
and it is at the back side of the high
school
we
used
to study at.

This is not a
very
wide
street
and since it is on the back side,
people
often
avoid this road and take the main
street
. There are
some
2-3 storied
buildings
there and one 7th storied
building
is situated
beside this
street
. A large portion of the street-side
is occupied
by the high
school
and there is a pond, 2 lamp posts, one post office and 2
small
tea stalls
are situated
beside this street.

I
used
to
visit
this
street
and spent
time
with my
friends
in my teenage
time
mostly
.
Since
I
now
live
in a
different
city I rarely
visit
this
street
.
However
, I go to this
street
sometimes
with my
friends
whenever I
visit
my
hometown
. This is the
place
where I spend my
time
with my
friends
in the evening when I stay in my
hometown
. I go to my
hometown
3-4
times
in a year and
visit
this
street
each
time
I
visit
my hometown.

I like this
street
because
I have
so
many
memories related to this
street
.
I
still
go there whenever I
visit
my town. And this
very
street
where I
used
to spend
some
of my golden periods reminds me of my
old
time
there. Being there with my
friends
sometimes
reminds me of things I
used
to do there and how precious the
time
was. For these reasons, I like this
street
very
much.
 
Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
Describe
a
street
or
place
in your
hometown
.
Describe
a busy
street
in your city.
Describe
a
place
you
often
go to.
Describe
a
place
where you
often
hang around with your
friends
.
Describe
a memorable
place
.
Describe
a
street
or park where you
often
played.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
113Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a street that you know well. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
770 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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