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Describe a vehicle that you would like to buy v.1

Describe a vehicle that you would like to buy v. 1
Describe a vehicle that you would like to buy You should say: what type of vehicle it would be why you like it for what purposes you will use this vehicle and explain why you want to buy this vehicle.
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Describe
a
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vehicle
that you would like to
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buy
You should say: what type of
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vehicle
it would be why you like it for what purposes you will
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use
this
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vehicle
and
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explain
why you want to
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buy
this
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vehicle
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0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS speaking Describe a vehicle that you would like to buy v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
40 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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