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Describe an important letter you wrote to someone. v.1

Describe an important letter you wrote to someone. v. 1
Describe an important letter you wrote to someone. You should say: When you wrote it Whom you wrote it to What it was about And explain why it was an important letter. Model Answer: One of the very important letters that I ever wrote was the one I wrote to the councillor of our city corporation. As I recall, I wrote this letter when I was only 16 years old. It was probably 2007 and I wrote this important letter to get a solution for the repair of a bridge in our locality. The letter was about the request of people of our community for repairing a bridge that thousands of people use daily. This was an old bridge and after an earthquake, it was in a dangerous situation. The accident might have happened anytime and the emergency repair work was needed. I wrote a letter to the councillor of our city corporation stating the facts and many persons of our locality signed on the back of this letter. Writing this letter was very important as the councillor of the city corporation was the right person to authorise the repair work of the bridge. After I felt that we were in a great danger, I wrote that letter and amazingly after few days the councillor came to visit the bridge and made necessary arrangement to have it repaired. I have written many letters and among them, this one was related to an issue of public safety. Since the prompt response was taken after I posted that letter, I felt really good about it. For all these reasons, this letter was of the most important letters I have ever written.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a letter or email you write to someone. Describe a letter you sent to someone on his/her birthday. Describe a complaints letter you wrote once. Describe a letter you wrote to a friend. Describe an important email you have received. Describe an important letter you received lately.
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to someone. You should say: When you
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it Whom you
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it to What it was about And
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why it was an
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. Model Answer:

One of the
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that I ever
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was the one I
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to the councillor of our city corporation. As I recall, I
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this
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letter
when I was
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only
16 years
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. It was
probably
2007 and I
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this
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important
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letter
to
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get
a solution for the repair of a
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bridge
in our locality. The
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letter
was about the request of
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people
of our community for repairing a
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bridge
that thousands of
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people
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use
daily. This was an
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old
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bridge
and after an earthquake, it was in a
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dangerous
situation. The accident might have happened anytime and the emergency repair work
was needed
. I
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wrote
a
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letter
to the councillor of our city corporation stating the facts and
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many
persons of our locality signed on the back of this
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. Writing this
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was
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as the councillor of the city corporation was the
right
person to
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authorise
the repair work of the
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bridge
. After I felt that we were in a great
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danger
, I
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wrote
that
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letter
and
amazingly
after few days the councillor came to visit the
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bridge
and made necessary arrangement to have it repaired. I have written
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many
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letters
and among them, this one
was related
to an issue of public safety. Since the prompt response
was taken
after I posted that
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letter
, I felt
really
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about it. For all these reasons, this
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was of the most
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important
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I have ever written.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
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a
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letter
or email you write to someone.
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letter
you
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sent
to someone on his/her birthday.
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a complaints
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letter
you
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wrote
once.
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a
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letter
you
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wrote
to a friend.
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Describe
an
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important
email you have received.
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Describe
an
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you received lately.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
50Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
Frank Smith

IELTS speaking Describe an important letter you wrote to someone. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
352 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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