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Describe a song that you like. v.1

Describe a song that you like. v. 1
Describe a song that you like. You should say: What is it. How often you hear it. What types of people listen to it. and explain why you like this song. Model Answer: The national anthem is a song that I really like with all of my heart and soul. I often hear this song and as it is our national anthem, we always show respect for it. There are only a few lines in this song and yet the appeal of it gives me a divine sensation. People from all ages, classes, ethnicity, professions and different tastes love this song and show their respect to this song. There are many reasons for me to love this song and first and foremost reason if the fact that this is our national anthem. This song is in my heart, mind and blood. I have heard this song several hundred times and yet it gives me a new impression and I feel an everlasting love towards it. I feel a great joy listening to it and sometimes I hymn this song and that is also a pleasant experience. This song represents my country, our authenticity as a nation, represents our culture and heritage. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe your favourite song. Describe a song you often listen to.   Describe a song or piece of music you really like. Describe your national anthem. Describe the type of song you like most.
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Describe
a song that you like. You should say: What is it. How
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often
you hear it. What types of
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people
listen to it. and
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explain
why you like this song. Model Answer:

The
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national
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anthem
is a song that I
really
like with all of my heart and soul. I
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often
hear this song and as it is our
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national
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anthem
, we always
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show
respect for it. There are
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only
a few lines in this song and
yet
the appeal of it gives me a divine sensation.
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People
from all ages, classes, ethnicity, professions and
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different
tastes
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love
this song and
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show
their respect to this song. There are
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many
reasons for me to
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love
this song and
first
and foremost reason if the fact that this is our
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national
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anthem
. This song is in my heart, mind and blood. I have heard this song several hundred times and
yet
it gives me a new impression and I feel an everlasting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
towards it. I feel a great joy listening to it and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
I hymn this song and
that is
also
a pleasant experience. This song represents my country, our authenticity as a nation, represents our culture and heritage. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
your
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favourite
song.
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Describe
a song you
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often
listen to.
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You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a song or piece of music you
really
like.
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Describe
your
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national
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anthem
.
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Describe
the type of song you like most.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a song that you like. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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