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Describe a food item you like to eat outside your home. v.1

Describe a food item you like to eat outside your home. v. 1
Describe a food item you like to eat outside your home. You should say: what food item it is why you like it how often you eat it and explain why you like to eat it outside. Follow-up questions: - Why do people go out to restaurants? - What are the benefits of eating out? Why?   Model Answer 1: I love all kinds of food items when I am hungry whether I am eating them at home or at a restaurant. But, I come from a family which always prefer eating at home than to eating outside, no matter how good some of the food at restaurants taste. However, my mother doesn’t mind if I eat one particular food item outside of my home since it is called the world-famous “German Chocolate Cake”. Yes, German chocolate cake is undoubtedly one of my most favourite desserts, if not the most favourite, of all time. Interestingly enough, I don’t like to eat other chocolate cakes, but if it ever comes to eating a very good German chocolate cake, I won’t mind it even if I have to travel miles to eat it. And when I eat it, I never really stop at eating just one piece, but rather I keep eating them until I don’t crave for it anymore. By the way, I have always asked myself how possibly a person, who doesn’t like chocolate cakes, can enjoy eating a thing called “German chocolate cake”. So, why I like it so much? Well, to appreciate and understand my answer to this question, you actually have to feel the “out of this world” sweet crunch of the Coconut Pecan icing, combined with the not too sweet and not too bitter taste of the German's chocolate, along with the taste of rich creamy buttermilk. Now, where can we get such a perfect combination of sweet, sour, and bitter in a cake mix in order to make one of the most amazing tastes ever made other than in a chocolate cake! Anyway, I like this particular food item, primarily because the truth is, neither I nor any of my family member is able to bake such a tasty cake at home. Besides, when I go to eat this cake outside, I also get to taste some other delicious food items that help me change my taste from time to time after eating the same kinds of food at home for a long time.   Sample Answer 2: I like to eat pizza outside the home. Pizza is not made in our house except on a very rare occasion once or twice in a year and that's why I have always eaten it outside my home. Dominos Pizza, Pizza Inn, Helvetia, Tongue & Tommy, Pizzasta are some of my favourite places where I eat pizza. I like it because it is tasty and delicious. This food item requires only a few minutes to be served and I can eat it when I am in a hurry. Another reason is the variation this food item has. Several types of pizza can be found and because of that, a pizza lover can taste the different types of pizza and variation of those pizzas. It is cheaper compared to other dishes I eat outside. A moderate size pizza can be shared among 3-4 persons. Finally, it is not a very rich food and can be eaten at any time of the day. I usually eat pizza once in a week and the frequency of eating pizza sometimes depends on the frequency of my meeting my friends in a restaurant who serves pizza. Eating pizza is not occasion dependent like some other dishes like Mexican foods, Italian food etc. I mostly eat pizza when I need a quick meal and when I meet my friends in a restaurant. Since pizza is liked by most of my friends, when we sit together in a place where pizza is served and we need to eat something, we mostly order pizza.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would also enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics: 1.   Describe your favourite food. 2.   Describe an outdoor meal you had. 3.   Describe a food item you often eat. 4.   Describe a fast food item you like. 5.   Describe a food item you often eat with your friends. 6.   Describe an outdoor meal or picnic you had.
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Describe
a
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food
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item
you like to
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eat
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outside
your home. You should say: what
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food
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item
it is why you like it how
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often
you
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eat
it and
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explain
why you like to
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eat
it
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outside
. Follow-up questions:

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Why do
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people
go out to restaurants?

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What are the benefits of
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eating
out? Why?
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Model Answer 1:

I
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love
all kinds of
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food
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items
when I am hungry whether I am
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eating
them at home or at a
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restaurant
.
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But
, I
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come
from a family which always prefer
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eating
at home than to
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eating
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outside
, no matter how
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good
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some of the
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food
at
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restaurants
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taste
.
However
, my mother doesn’t mind if I
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eat
one particular
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food
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item
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outside of
my home since it
is called
the world-
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famous
“German Chocolate Cake”.

Yes, German chocolate
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cake
is
undoubtedly
one of my most
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favourite
desserts, if not the most
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favourite
, of all
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time
.
Interestingly
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enough
, I don’t like to
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eat
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other
chocolate
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cakes
,
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but
if it ever
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comes
to
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eating
a
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very
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good
German chocolate
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cake
, I won’t mind it even if I
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have to
travel miles to
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eat
it. And when I
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eat
it, I never
really
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stop
at
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eating
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just
one piece,
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but
rather
I
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keep
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eating
them until I don’t crave for it anymore.

By the way, I have always asked myself how
possibly
a person, who doesn’t like chocolate
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cakes
, can enjoy
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eating
a thing called “German chocolate
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cake”
.
So
, why I like it
so
much?
Well
, to appreciate and understand my answer to this question, you
actually
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have to
feel the “out of this world” sweet crunch of the Coconut Pecan icing, combined with the not too sweet and not too bitter
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taste
of the German's chocolate, along with the
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taste
of rich creamy buttermilk.
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Now
, where can we
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get
such a perfect combination of sweet, sour, and bitter in a
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cake
mix in order to
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make
one of the most amazing
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tastes
ever made
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other
than in a chocolate cake!

Anyway
, I like this particular
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food
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item
,
primarily
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because
the truth is, neither I nor any of my family member is able to bake such a tasty
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cake
at home.
Besides
, when I go to
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eat
this
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cake
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outside
, I
also
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get
to
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taste
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some
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other
delicious
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food
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items
that
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help
me
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change
my
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taste
from
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time
to
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time
after
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eating
the same kinds of
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food
at home for a long
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time
.
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Sample Answer 2:

I like to
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eat
pizza
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outside
the home. Pizza is not made in our
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house
except on a
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very
rare occasion once or twice in a year and that's why I have always eaten it
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outside
my home.
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Dominos
Pizza, Pizza Inn,
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Helvetia
, Tongue
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&amp
; Tommy,
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Pizzasta
are
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some
of my
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favourite
places where I
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eat
pizza.

I like it
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because
it is tasty and delicious. This
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food
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item
requires
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only
a few minutes to
be served
and I can
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eat
it when I am in a hurry. Another reason is the variation this
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food
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item
has. Several types of pizza can
be found
and
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because
of that, a pizza lover can
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taste
the
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different
types of pizza and variation of those pizzas. It is cheaper compared to
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other
dishes I
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eat
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outside
. A moderate size pizza can
be shared
among 3-4 persons.
Finally
, it is not a
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very
rich
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food
and can
be eaten
at any
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time
of the day.

I
usually
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eat
pizza once in a week and the frequency of
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eating
pizza
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sometimes
depends on the frequency of my meeting my
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friends
in a
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restaurant
who serves pizza.
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Eating
pizza is not occasion dependent like
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some
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other
dishes like Mexican
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foods
, Italian
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food
etc. I
mostly
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eat
pizza when I need a quick meal and when I
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meet
my
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friends
in a
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restaurant
. Since pizza
is liked
by most of my
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friends
, when we sit together in a place where pizza is
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served and
we need to
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eat
something, we
mostly
order pizza.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would
also
enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics:

1.
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Describe
your
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favourite
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food. 2
.
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Describe
an outdoor meal you had.

3.
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Describe
a
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food
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item
you
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often
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eat. 4
.
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Describe
a
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fast
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food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
item
you like.

5.
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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food
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item
you
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often
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eat
with your
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friends. 6
.
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an outdoor meal or picnic you had.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
109Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a food item you like to eat outside your home. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
16 paragraphs
749 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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