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Describe a leader or a politician whom you admire. v.1

Describe a leader or a politician whom you admire. v. 1
Describe a leader or a politician whom you admire. You should say: who he/she is/was what so appealing is about him/her what type of leader or politician he/she is/was and explain why do you admire him /her.   Model Answer 1: If we ask ourselves as to how many leaders or politicians in this world have managed to become prime minister of a country at the age of 91 again after serving in the same capacity as a prime minister for about 22 years in the past? Well, the answer is, probably only one. His name is Dr. Mahathir Mohammad, the sitting prime minister of Malaysia, who has made it almost a habit to defeat his political opponent at ease. Otherwise, how possibly an old person of his age can make such a strong comeback in politics after remaining politically inactive, apart from criticizing his successor every once in a while, for almost 15 years! What’s the secret behind such an enviable accomplishment? Well, there could be many reasons, one could possibly guess for that, but one thing, for sure, is certain that he is from a completely different breed of politicians who is able to show his guts and grits in the face of extreme adversity unlike anybody else. In fact, very few leaders in this world have managed to remain calm and lead on to transform a third world country into a role model of economic success for all the countries around the world. Besides, as a politician of simple nature, who always likes to put the interest of his people ahead of everything else, one of the most appealing things about this great political leader is that he is never afraid to voice out his opposition to all kinds of oppression. Anyway, I admire this person because of his visionary leadership and statesmanship who completely changed the face of Malaysia from a third world country to a regional economic powerhouse within just 22 years. Some people may passionately call him a “benevolent dictator”, but his intention to listen to his people carefully certainly makes a very admirable person, not only among his own people but also to people from the rest of the world. Finally, I admire him also because he never likes to give up in achieving his dream for his nation.   Sample Answer 2: The leader I really like and admire is (…say the name of a politician or a leader you know about…) who had great contributions to make our country a better place. He was a mainstream politician for a long and was involved in active politics from his school life. He had a great contribution to our freedom fighting as well as in several other activities for the betterment of our nation. He lived from 1940 till 2000 and his death was a great loss for the nation.   He was an honest and brave politician which has become rare in present days. He never compromised with the evil power of politics and foreign powers. He had risked his life several times and with his bravery, he had bought some advantageous changes in the country. He was an idol for the nations and for his honesty and bravery he is a well-known figure in the world.   He was an active member of the (. . . say a political party name…) and never longed for power or fame. He could have easily gained a powerful position in the country but he had always led a simple and yet exemplary life.   I admire him for his unmatched contribution to the country and for the nation. We need many leaders like him and I regret the fact that we have only very few leaders like him in our country. He was an ideal leader who has put his personal benefits away while he thought for the benefits of the country and the nation.
Describe
a
leader
or a
politician
whom you
admire
. You should say:
who
he/she is/was what
so
appealing is about him/her what type of
leader
or
politician
he/she is/was and
explain
why do you
admire
him /her.
 
Model Answer 1:

If we ask ourselves as to how
many
leaders
or
politicians
in this
world
have managed to become prime minister of a
country
at the age of 91 again after serving in the same capacity as a prime minister for about 22 years in the past?
Well
, the answer is,
probably
only
one.

His name is Dr.
Mahathir
Mohammad, the sitting prime minister of Malaysia,
who
has made it almost a habit to defeat his political opponent at
ease
.
Otherwise
, how
possibly
an
old
person of his age can
make
such a strong comeback in politics after remaining
politically
inactive, apart from criticizing his successor every once in a while, for almost 15 years! What’s the secret behind such an enviable accomplishment?

Well
, there could be
many
reasons, one could
possibly
guess for that,
but
one thing, for sure, is certain that he is from a completely
different
breed of
politicians
who
is able to
show
his guts and grits in the face of extreme adversity unlike anybody else. In fact,
very
few
leaders
in this
world
have managed to remain calm and lead on to transform a third
world
country
into a role model of economic success for all the
countries
around the
world
.
Besides
, as a
politician
of simple nature,
who
always
likes
to put the interest of his
people
ahead of everything else, one of the most appealing things about this
great
political
leader
is that he is never afraid to voice out his opposition to all kinds of oppression.

Anyway
, I
admire
this person
because
of his visionary leadership and statesmanship
who
completely
changed
the face of Malaysia from a third
world
country
to a regional economic powerhouse within
just
22 years.
Some
people
may
passionately
call him a “benevolent dictator”,
but
his intention to listen to his
people
carefully
certainly
makes
a
very
admirable person, not
only
among his
own
people
but
also
to
people
from the rest of the
world
.
Finally
, I
admire
him
also
because
he never
likes
to give up in achieving his dream for his
nation
.
 
Sample Answer 2:

The
leader
I
really
like
and
admire
is (…say the name of a
politician
or a
leader
you know
about…)
who
had
great
contributions to
make
our
country
a better place. He was a mainstream
politician
for a long and
was involved
in active politics from his school life. He had a
great
contribution to our freedom fighting as
well
as in several other activities for the betterment of our
nation
.
He
lived
from 1940 till 2000
and his death was a
great
loss for the
nation
.
 
He
was an honest and brave
politician
which has become rare in present days.
He
never compromised with the evil power of politics and foreign powers.
He
had risked his life several times and with his bravery, he had
bought
some
advantageous
changes
in the
country
.
He
was an idol for the
nations
and for his honesty and bravery he is a
well
-known figure in the
world
.
 
He
was an active member of the (.
.
.
say
a political party name…) and never longed for power or fame. He could have
easily
gained a powerful position in the
country
but
he had always led a simple and
yet
exemplary life.
 
I
admire
him for his unmatched contribution to the
country
and for the
nation
. We need
many
leaders
like
him and I regret the fact that we have
only
very
few
leaders
like
him in our
country
. He was an ideal
leader
who
has put his personal benefits away while he
thought
for the benefits of the
country
and the
nation
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
68Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a leader or a politician whom you admire. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
652 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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