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Describe something you use for your work or studies. v.1

Describe something you use for your work or studies. v. 1
Describe something you use for your work or studies. You should say: what it is how you use it how often you use it and say if you would be able to do you work or studies without this thing. Model Answer: I have recently completed my graduation majoring Bachelor of Business Administration and have joined a financial service providing organisation recently. The laptop I have is really handy in terms of my works. I used it for my studies as well and this laptop has become an inevitable part of my work. I use my laptop to store my valuable documents, to get various information from the internet and also to do numerous works like contacting my collages, processing word documents, sending and reading emails etc. The spreadsheet software is very handy to present and calculate data, the presentation software like Power Point enables me to create presentations and the Microsoft Project enables me to plan and track the ongoing projects in my office. I use this laptop almost 4-6 hours every day during my office period and even on my days off I use it 3-4 hours each day on an average. Honestly speaking, it would be quite impossible to manage my work without this device and if I have to discard this device from my work life, the productivity would decrease significantly. Speedy communication, automated project management, processing a huge number of data and storing them in a save manner would become pretty complex without the laptop. I consider this device to be an essential thing for my work and without it; I won’t be able to manage my works. With time we have become so much dependent on this device that, we are not in a position to continue our work without it.   Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe something you often use.   Describe an electronic device you own. Describe a tool or device you have at home. Describe a tool that has made your life easier. Describe something you often use for your study. Describe something valuable you own.
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Describe
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something
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for your
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work
or
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studies
. You should say: what it is how you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
you
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use
it and say if you would be able to do you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
without this thing. Model Answer:

I have recently completed my graduation majoring Bachelor of Business Administration and have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
a financial service providing
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
recently. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
I have is
really
handy in terms of my works. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
it for my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
as
well
and this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
has become an inevitable part of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
to store my valuable documents, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
various information from the internet and
also
to do numerous works like contacting my collages, processing word documents, sending and reading emails etc. The spreadsheet software is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
handy to present and calculate data, the presentation software like
Did you mean "PowerPoint" (= Microsoft presentation software)?
Power Point
enables me to create presentations and the Microsoft Project enables me to plan and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
the ongoing projects in my office. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
almost 4-6 hours every day during my office period and even on my days off I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it 3-4 hours each day on an average.
Honestly
speaking, it would be quite impossible to manage my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
without this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
device
and if I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
discard this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
device
from my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
life, the productivity would decrease
significantly
. Speedy communication, automated project management, processing a huge number of data and storing them in a save manner would become pretty complex without the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
. I consider this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
device
to be an essential thing for my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and without it; I won’t be able to manage my works. With
The comma is probably missing here: "time, we".
time we
have become
so
much dependent on this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
device
that, we are not in a position to continue our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
without it.
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
something
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
an electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
device
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a tool or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
device
you have at home.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a tool that has made your life easier.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
something
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
something
valuable you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe something you use for your work or studies. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
363 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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