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Describe a common transportation system for commuters in your city. v.1

Describe a common transportation system for commuters in your city. v. 1
Describe a common transportation system for commuters in your city. You should say: What kind of transport it is What types of people use this transport How convenient it is And explain whether you like it or not. Model Answer: Public Bus is a very common transportation system in our country and the majority of the commuters in cities and urban areas use this transportation system. There are two types of public bus systems in our country- short distance buses and long distance buses. There are many governments owned bus service system which is available mostly in the metropolitan system. There are varieties of sizes in these buses ranging from 10 seats to as many as 100 seats and even double-decker buses as well. People from all classes and economic conditions use these buses and who do not own private cars, most of the times use this transportation system. Since there are cheap and expensive buses based on the facilities allowed, people with low earnings mostly use the non-AC, small buses. While the people with better economic conditions use air conditioned and a bit expensive service. This is the most convenient transportation system in our country in terms of expenses and availability. Hiring taxi or private cars cost a lot and they are not always available. So people mostly depend on the public bus transportation system which offers a very low fair and are always available for almost all of the destinations. I mostly use this bus transportation system for short and long distance travels and communications and I find it very handy. Though there are some disadvantages of this transportation system, I would say still this is the best way for commuters to more to different places in my city.   Part 3 – Two-way discussion: Q. What are some common transportations in your city? Q. How do most people travel long distances in your country? Q. Have the types of transport people use changed much over the last few decades? Q. What kinds of improvement have there been in transport in your country in recent years? Q. Do you think transport is likely to continue to improve in the future? Q. Do you think the government should impose a restriction on citizens' car ownership?   Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a journey you took using public transportation. Describe a public transportation system available in your city. Describe the main transportation system available in your country.
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a common
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transportation
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system
for commuters in your city. You should say: What kind of
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transport
it is What types of
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people
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use
this
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transport
How convenient it is And
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explain
whether you like it or not. Model Answer:

Public Bus is a
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very
common
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transportation
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system
in our
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country
and the majority of the commuters in
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cities
and urban areas
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use
this
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transportation
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system
. There are two types of
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public
bus
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systems
in our
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country-
short
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distance
buses and long
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distance
buses. There are
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many
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governments
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owned
bus service
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system
which is
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available
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mostly
in the metropolitan
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system
.
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There
are varieties of sizes in these buses ranging from 10 seats to as
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many
as 100 seats and even
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double-decker
buses as
well
.
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People
from all classes and economic conditions
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use
these buses and who do not
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own
private cars,
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most of the times
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use
this
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transportation
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system
. Since there are
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cheap
and expensive buses based on the facilities
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allowed
,
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people
with low earnings
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mostly
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use
the non-AC,
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small
buses. While the
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people
with better economic conditions
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use
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
air conditioned
and a bit expensive service. This is the most convenient
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transportation
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system
in our
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country
in terms of expenses and availability. Hiring taxi or private cars cost a
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lot and
they are not always
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available
.
So
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people
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mostly
depend on the
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public
bus
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transportation
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system
which offers a
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very
low
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fair
and are always
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available
for almost
Consider using "all the".
all of the
destinations. I
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mostly
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use
this bus
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transportation
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system
for short and long
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distance
travels and communications and I find it
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very
handy. Though there are
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some
disadvantages of this
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transportation
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system
, I would say
still
this is the best way for commuters to more to
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different
places in my city.
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Part 3
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–
Two-way discussion: Q. What are
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some
common
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transportations
in your city?

Q. How do most
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people
travel long
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distances
in your country?

Q. Have the types of
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transport
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people
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use
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changed
much over the last few decades?

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Q
. What kinds of improvement have there been in
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transport
in your
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country
in recent years?

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Q
. Do you
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think
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transport
is likely to continue to
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improve
in the future?

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Q
. Do you
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think
the
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government
should impose a restriction on citizens' car ownership?
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Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
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Describe
a journey you took using
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public
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transportation
.
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Describe
a
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public
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transportation
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system
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available
in your city.
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Describe
the main
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transportation
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system
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available
in your
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country
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
64Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a common transportation system for commuters in your city. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
7 paragraphs
425 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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