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Describe a tourist destination in your town or country. v.1

Describe a tourist destination in your town or country. v. 1
Describe a tourist destination in your town or country. You should say: What it is What types of people visit there What is the significance of this destination And say what the main attractions of this place. Model Answer: I live in Australia and this country is considered to be a dream land for tourists. Mesmerising natural beauty, sacred aboriginal places, coral reefs, red deserts, famous man-made architectures, staggering contrast and spectacular views make it an ideal place for tourists all over the world. One of the famous tourist destinations in my country is Daintree National Park. This is situated in Far North Queensland and was founded in the year 1981. It became the part of the World Heritage in 1988 and this is one of the most visited tourist spots in Australia. This place is one of the most ancient ecosystems on earth and well-known for the exceptional biodiversity it offers. People from all over the Australia as well as from the foreign countries come to visit this place. People who visit this place include children to older people and the natural inhabitants attract tourists who love to visit natural wonders more than the man-made constructions. The diverse ecosystem of this place comprises more than 18 thousand plant species and a vast array of animal species. Stunning beauty, diverse ecosystem, a vast array of animals and plants, wonderful experience of sunset and the rainforests are few of the attractions of this place. This place has so many marvels and livelihood to offer that people often visit here more than once.   Part 3 – Two-way discussion: Q. What are some tourist attractions in your country? Q. Should these places be free for everyone to visit? Q. Do foreigners visit these attractions? Where do they mostly come from? Q. What are the benefits of foreigners visiting tourist attractions in your country? Q. What are the disadvantages of it? Q. Do you know about any environmental issues associated with it?   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a place you want to visit. Describe a place you have recently visited. Describe a tourist destination you want to visit in the future. Describe a place you have recently visited. Describe a foreign place you want to visit. Describe a naturally beautiful place you know about.
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Describe
a
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tourist
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destination
in your town or
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country
. You should say: What it is What types of
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people
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visit
there What is the significance of this
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destination
And say what the main
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attractions
of this
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place
. Model Answer:

I
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live
in Australia and this
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country
is considered
to be a dream land for
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tourists
.
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Mesmerising
natural beauty, sacred aboriginal
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places
, coral reefs, red deserts,
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famous
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man
-made architectures, staggering contrast and spectacular views
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make
it an ideal
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place
for
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tourists
all over the world. One of the
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famous
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tourist
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destinations
in my
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country
is
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Daintree
National Park. This
is situated
in Far North Queensland and
was founded
in the year 1981. It became the part of the World Heritage in 1988 and this is one of the most visited
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tourist
spots in Australia. This
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place
is one of the most ancient ecosystems on earth and
well
-known for the exceptional biodiversity it offers.
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People
from all over the Australia as
well
as from the foreign
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countries
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come
to
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visit
this
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place
.
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People
who
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visit
this
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place
include children to older
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people
and the natural inhabitants attract
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tourists
who
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love
to
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visit
natural wonders more than the
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man
-made constructions. The diverse ecosystem of this
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place
comprises more than 18 thousand plant species and a vast array of animal species. Stunning beauty, diverse ecosystem, a vast array of animals and plants, wonderful experience of sunset and the rainforests are few of the
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attractions
of this
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place
. This
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place
has
so
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many
marvels and livelihood to offer that
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people
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often
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visit
here more than once.
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Part 3
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–
Two-way discussion: Q. What are
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some
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tourist
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attractions
in your
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country
? Q. Should these
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places
be free for everyone to
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visit
? Q. Do foreigners
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visit
these
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attractions
? Where do they
mostly
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come
from? Q. What are the benefits of foreigners visiting
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tourist
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attractions
in your
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country
? Q. What are the disadvantages of it?
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Q
. Do
you know
about any environmental issues associated with it?
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a
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place
you want to
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visit
.
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Describe
a
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place
you have recently visited.
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Describe
a
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tourist
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destination
you want to
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visit
in the future.
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Describe
a
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place
you have recently visited.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a foreign
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place
you want to
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visit
.
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Describe
a
naturally
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beautiful
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place
you know
about.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
61Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a tourist destination in your town or country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
402 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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