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Describe a female leader you like. v.1

Describe a female leader you like. v. 1
Describe a female leader you like. You should say: who is she where is she from what she does for others and explain why you like her. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer: There are very few people, at least, people who like to remain informed about the political development of this world, who don’t know about "Angela Merkel". In fact, she is considered as the most powerful woman in this world today, and she also happens to be the de facto leader of the European Union. Well, a female leader I really like and admire is none other than the charismatic German Chancellor “Angela Merkel”. This great female leader, one of the best female leaders, in my opinion, the world has ever seen, maybe from German, but she certainly has left her marks in dealing with each and every international political crisis since she took her office as a German Chancellor in the year of 2005.   Also known as the “leader of the free world”, this great world political figure was born in 1954 in the city Hamburg and has been elected to rule German for 4 consecutive terms, a feat which no female politicians have ever achieved in the world’s history. As a political leader, her political activities are easily noticeable, but it is the intentions behind those activities that have made her a great leader. In fact, Angela Markel’s decision to allow more than one million political refugees, displaced because of wars, into German was a landmark decision which would make the world to remember her for a long, long time. Besides, providing financial help to other countries, especially in Europe, is also something that the world would remember very gratefully because it helped stabilize the economy of the entire world little over a decade ago. Anyway, I really like Angela Markel because she seems to be a very charismatic and intelligent leader who understands the dynamics of world politics much better than the other contemporary leaders. I like her also because she is not afraid to take unpopular decisions in order to uphold the principles of humanity. Finally, I like her because her leadership approaches help bring the world community together instead of actually dividing them over some petty differences.
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Describe
a
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female
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leader
you like. You should say:
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who
is she where is she from what she does for others and
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explain
why you like her. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
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Model Answer:

There are
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very
few
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people
, at least,
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people
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who
like to remain informed about the political development of this
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world
,
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who
don’t know about
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"
Angela Merkel
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"
. In fact, she
is considered
as the most powerful woman in this
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world
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today
, and she
also
happens to be the de facto
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leader
of the European Union.
Well
, a
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female
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leader
I
really
like and admire is none
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other
than the charismatic German Chancellor “Angela Merkel”.

This great
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female
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leader
, one of the best
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female
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leaders
, in my opinion, the
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world
has ever
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seen
, maybe from German,
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but
she
certainly
has
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left
her marks in dealing with each and every international political crisis since she took her office as a German Chancellor in the year of 2005.
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Also
known as the
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“leader
of the free
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world”
, this great
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world
political figure
was born
in 1954 in the city Hamburg and has
been elected
to
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rule
German for 4 consecutive terms, a feat which no
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female
politicians have ever achieved in the
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world’s
history.

As a political
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leader
, her political activities are
easily
noticeable,
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but
it is the intentions behind those activities that have made her a great
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leader
. In fact, Angela
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Markel
’s decision to
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allow
more than one million political refugees, displaced
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because
of wars, into German was a landmark decision which would
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make
the
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world
to remember her for a long, long time.
Besides
, providing financial
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help
to
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other
countries,
especially
in Europe, is
also
something that the
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world
would remember
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very
gratefully
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because
it
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helped
stabilize the economy of the entire
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world
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little
over a decade ago.

Anyway
, I
really
like Angela
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Markel
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because
she seems to be a
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very
charismatic and intelligent
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leader
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who
understands the dynamics of
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world
politics much better than the
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other
contemporary
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leaders
. I like her
also
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because
she is not afraid to take unpopular decisions in order to uphold the principles of humanity.
Finally
, I like her
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because
her leadership approaches
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help
bring the
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world
community together
instead
of
actually
dividing them over
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some
petty differences.
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33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a female leader you like. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
410 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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