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Talk about a friend who you think is a good leader. v.1

Talk about a friend who you think is a good leader. v. 1
Talk about a friend who you think is a good leader. You should say: who is he /she what he/ she does how you met him /her And explain why you think he/she is a good leader. Model Answer 1: A ‘good leader’- That’s quite a philosophical concept! I can think of a friend who I think is a brilliant leader. I’m going to tell you all about her. Who she is, what she does, how I come to know her, but most importantly what it is about her approach that I think makes her a great leader. So this is a friend of mine I was at school with. After finishing our education with both went in different directions, and I didn’t see her again for thirty years when we met up again completely by chance in a different city where we were both now living. It’s actually quite hard to describe ‘what she does’ because that is part of her style, she does lots of different things, and it seems wrong somehow to pigeon hole her with just one activity.   She makes a living through running her own business making specially decorated biscuits which she supplies by mail order. But she is the sort of person who always has a multitude of things on the go at any one time. She is involved in many sports clubs, on the organising committee for the local scouts (a national youth organisation) - including arranging an annual Guy Fawkes’ Night bonfire and firework display for many years which is their main fundraising event; and on top of that she is always initiating new – to me ambitious – projects like holding a huge birthday party or suggesting an outing further afield. What makes this friend a good leader is hard to pinpoint. I don’t think it is any one thing, it is rather a combination of positive characteristics. She is very energetic, so prepared to work hard to get things done. She is optimistic, inclined to see opportunities and possibilities where other people might be put off by potential problems. This energy and optimism engage other people. You can be confident if you invest time and energy in supporting her ideas they will happen, it won’t be a waste of time. She is also incredibly well organised, with an attention to detail. This is important for morale! It means that if you turn up in the pouring rain to I don’t know, build a bonfire or erect a tent, she will have thought of things that make it fun. You will find a gas bottle fuelled urn of bubbling hot water to make tea to keep you going, or maybe at a certain time a mass order of scalding hot chips, wrapped in paper from the local chip shop will appear as if by magic to keep everyone going for a couple more hours. She has an ability to network, which means if one of her projects require some particular expertise she’ll almost inevitably know someone who knows someone that will get it done for free. It is inspiring to be involved in her projects, you get a great sense of satisfaction working together as part of a team, confident that the person driving it all forwards knows what needs to be done, and that it will be enjoyable along the way. When whatever project it is has finished, she always remembers to thank you and let you know for example how much money was raised, or how many people attended. It is quite a skill. Leadership is not easy. A good leader in my view inspires and motivates others to do their best, rather than tells people what to do. By believing in you, they can help you believe in yourself, and then everyone together achieves far more than they ever could on their own, and probably a great deal more than they thought possible at the outset…. If only my managers and bosses in the workplace had such good leadership skills I think I’d get a lot more done! [ Written by - Lucy Marris:   Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam) ]   Sample Answer 2: My first encounter with Edda Derica took place at the University of Hamburg. Both of us were students of political science there. Now she is a promising leader for one of the local political parties. I am happy having chance to recall about her. Edda Derica is a lady filled with great vigour. She is from a noble German family. Derica wanted to join politics and she did so with the support of her family. At present, she is the second in command of a political party and playing important roles. She is smart and intelligent. She was the same in her university days when I had met her. I have been familiar with her such characteristics from a long ago and also inspired her to reach her goals. In her private life, Derica is not so much reserved. She loves meeting new people and makes a good inter-personal relation which is a must for a political leader. Derica is an influential leader of Free Voters, one of the leading political parties in Germany. She is the second in command for the party and undertakes a large number of responsibilities. But in her career, she is a teacher. She is a teacher of social science at a local university but she does not take full-time classes there. She is a part-time faculty because she needs to remain busy with her political activities. But she is bright in both the cases. She has a great demand in her university as a teacher and at the same time, she is gaining popularity among the people and her political party authority for her contribution to the growth of the party. She is now responsible for raising awareness among the population about her party, take some important decisions, add or remove members and more other tasks. I was a student of the University of Hamburg. Before getting admission in Political Science, I took admission in Economics as an undergraduate. But later, I moved to Political Science as I lost interest in Economics and the course also appeared complex to me. In the first day of the class, I took a seat beside a girl. I did not know that she would be the best friend of mine in the university days and will remain forever. She was Derica. The initial introduction started from her part as I was a bit shy and introvert in communication with others. Later, I found that this young girl was enriched with robustness and had a great vision in mind. Derica is a good leader. She owns some exceptional qualities with her. She is a good leader and will move ahead, I believe, for some reasons. First of all, she knows how to deal with people. This is her inborn quality. She knows how to handle situations, how to take control on agitating people or how to keep them under control. Besides, she is able to deliver speeches smartly and thus wins the hearts of her audiences. She comes forward whenever she finds someone in distress and she does it from her heart. Derica has no expectations in return for the favour she did to others. As a result, she is moving forwards and secured her position as an influential figure in her party within a couple of years after joining. She owns the potentials to grow more. Based on such analysis, I think she has the leadership skills and someday she will reach in a top position.
Talk about a
friend
who
you
think
is a
good
leader
. You should say:
who
is he /she what he/ she
does
how you met him /her And
explain
why you
think
he/she is a
good
leader
. Model Answer 1:

A ‘
good
leader’-
That’s quite a philosophical concept! I can
think
of a
friend
who
I
think
is a brilliant
leader
. I’m going to
tell
you all about her.
Who
she is, what she
does
, how I
come
to
know
her,
but
most
importantly
what it is about her approach that I
think
makes
her a
great
leader
.
So
this is a
friend
of mine I was at school with. After finishing our education with both went in
different
directions, and I didn’t
see
her again for thirty years when we met up again completely by chance in a
different
city where we were both
now
living. It’s
actually
quite
hard
to
describe
‘what she
does’
because
that is
part of her style, she
does
lots of
different
things, and it seems
wrong
somehow to
pigeon hole
her with
just
one activity.
 
She
makes
a living through running her
own
business making
specially
decorated biscuits which she supplies by mail order.
But
she is the sort of person
who
always has a multitude of things on the go at any one
time
. She
is involved
in
many
sports clubs, on the
organising
committee for the
local
scouts (a national youth
organisation
)
-
including arranging an annual Guy Fawkes’ Night bonfire and firework display for
many
years which is their main fundraising
event
; and
on top of that
she is always initiating new
to me ambitious
projects
like holding a huge birthday
party
or suggesting an outing
further
afield. What
makes
this
friend
a
good
leader
is
hard
to pinpoint. I don’t
think
it is
any one
thing, it is
rather
a combination of
positive
characteristics. She is
very
energetic,
so
prepared to work
hard
to
get
things done. She is optimistic, inclined to
see
opportunities and possibilities where
other
people
might
be put
off by potential problems. This energy and optimism engage
other
people
. You can be confident if you invest
time
and energy in supporting her
ideas
they will happen, it won’t be a waste of
time
. She is
also
incredibly
well organised
, with an attention to detail. This is
important
for morale! It means that if you turn up in the pouring rain to I don’t
know
, build a bonfire or erect a tent, she will have
thought
of things that
make
it fun. You will find a gas bottle fuelled urn of bubbling hot water to
make
tea to
keep
you going, or maybe at a certain
time
a mass order of scalding hot chips, wrapped in paper from the
local
chip shop will appear as if by magic to
keep
everyone
going
for a couple more hours. She has an ability to network, which means if one of her
projects
require
some
particular expertise she’ll almost
inevitably
know
someone
who
knows
someone that will
get
it done for free. It is inspiring to
be involved
in her
projects
, you
get
a
great
sense of satisfaction working together as part of a team, confident that the person driving it all forwards
knows
what needs to
be done
, and that it will be enjoyable along the way. When whatever
project
it is has finished, she always remembers to thank you and
let
you
know
for example
how much money
was raised
, or how
many
people
attended. It is quite a
skill
. Leadership is not easy. A
good
leader
in my view inspires and motivates others to do their best,
rather
than
tells
people
what to do. By believing in you, they can
help
you believe in yourself, and then everyone together achieves far more than they ever could on their
own
, and
probably
a
great
deal more than they
thought
possible at the outset…. If
only
my managers and bosses in the workplace had such
good
leadership
skills
I
think
I’d
get
a lot more done!
[
Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
:
 
Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL
teacher
(Vietnam)
]
 
Sample Answer 2:

My
first
encounter with Edda
Derica
took place at the
University
of Hamburg. Both of us were students of political
science
there.
Now
she is a promising
leader
for one of the
local
political
parties
. I am happy having chance to recall about her.

Edda
Derica
is a lady filled with
great
vigour
. She is from a noble German family.
Derica
wanted to
join
politics and
she did
so
with the support of her family. At present, she is the second in command of a political
party
and playing
important
roles. She is smart and intelligent. She was the same in her
university
days when I had met her. I have been familiar with her such characteristics from a long ago and
also
inspired her to reach her goals. In her private life,
Derica
is not
so
much reserved. She
loves
meeting new
people
and
makes
a
good
inter-personal relation which is a
must
for a political leader.

Derica
is an influential
leader
of Free Voters, one of the leading political
parties
in Germany. She is the second in command for the
party
and undertakes
a large number of
responsibilities.
But
in her career, she is a
teacher
. She is a
teacher
of social
science
at a
local
university
but
she
does
not take full-time classes there. She is a part-time faculty
because
she needs to remain busy with her political activities.
But
she is bright in both the cases. She has a
great
demand in her
university
as a
teacher
and at the same
time
, she is gaining popularity among the
people
and her political
party
authority for her contribution to the growth of the
party
. She is
now
responsible for raising awareness among the population about her
party
, take
some
important
decisions,
add
or remove members and more
other
tasks.

I was a student of the
University
of Hamburg.
Before
getting admission in Political
Science
, I took admission in Economics as an undergraduate.
But
later, I
moved
to Political
Science
as I lost interest in Economics and the course
also
appeared complex to me. In the
first
day of the
class
, I took a seat beside a girl. I did not
know
that she would be the best
friend
of mine in the
university
days and will remain forever. She was
Derica
. The initial introduction
started
from her part as I was a bit shy and introvert in communication with others. Later, I found that this young girl
was enriched
with robustness and had a
great
vision in mind.

Derica
is a
good
leader
. She
owns
some
exceptional qualities with her. She is a
good
leader
and will
move
ahead, I believe, for
some
reasons.
First of all
, she
knows
how to deal with
people
. This is her inborn quality. She
knows
how to handle situations, how to take control on agitating
people
or how to
keep
them under control.
Besides
, she is able to deliver speeches
smartly
and
thus
wins the hearts of her audiences. She
comes
forward whenever she finds someone in
distress and
she
does
it from her heart.
Derica
has no expectations in return for the
favour
she did to others.
As a result
, she is moving forwards and secured her position as an influential figure in her
party
within a couple of years after joining. She
owns
the potentials to grow more. Based on such analysis, I
think
she has the leadership
skills
and someday she will reach in a top position.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
117Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Talk about a friend who you think is a good leader. v. 1

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  American English
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1278 words
5.5
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