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Describe a fashion thing you often use.

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i honestly say, in modern era every one mostly youngster is adopting western culture and forget their own culture. those people daily wear different western clothes and other accessory. here i would like a talk about a fashionable thing which i often use. that thing is perfuem of david beckham company. i vividly remember it, that perfuem sent by my elder brother from new zealand. in present time plenty of perfuem have in my collection. i am daily use dubai made perfuem. but when i go to any occutaion that time mu first choice have david beckham perfuem. there are ample of reason behind that phenomina, first and foremost, it is very expansive perfuem insted of my perfuem collection. the price of that scent near about 100 new zealand dollar. futhermore, the aroma of perfuem have attractive and beautiful. when i used that perfuem first time, all my kith and kin gave good compeliment realted to aroma. most of my friend asked to my, which is perfuem do you use? if i use that perfuem the fergence of perfuem do not leave my clothe near about one month. i used lot of company perfuem, like; gucci, nike, fuke, addidass, ferrieri. but when i used david beckham perfuem i felt shocked. fergence of that perfuem totally different insted of another. all in all, i uses that perfuem often in life.
i
honestly
say, in modern era every one
mostly
youngster is adopting western culture and forget their
own
culture.
those
people
daily wear
different
western clothes and other accessory.
here
i
would like a talk about a fashionable thing which
i
often
use
.
that
thing is
perfuem
of
david
beckham
company
.
i
vividly
remember it, that
perfuem
sent
by my elder brother from
new zealand
.
in
present time
plenty
of
perfuem
have in my collection.
i
am daily
use
dubai
made
perfuem
.
but
when
i
go to any
occutaion
that time mu
first
choice have
david
beckham
perfuem
.
there
are ample of reason behind that
phenomina
,
first
and foremost, it is
very
expansive
perfuem
insted
of my
perfuem
collection.
the
price of that scent near about 100
new zealand
dollar.
futhermore
, the aroma of
perfuem
have attractive and
beautiful
.
when
i
used
that
perfuem
first
time, all my kith and kin gave
good
compeliment
realted
to aroma.
most
of my friend
asked to
my, which is
perfuem
do you
use
?
if
i
use
that
perfuem
the
fergence
of
perfuem
do not
leave
my clothe near about one month.
i
used
lot of
company
perfuem
, like;
gucci
,
nike
,
fuke
,
addidass
,
ferrieri
.
but
when
i
used
david
beckham
perfuem
i
felt shocked.
fergence
of that
perfuem
totally
different
insted
of another.
all
in all,
i
uses
that
perfuem
often
in life.
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