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Describe a classroom that you study or have studied in. v.1

Describe a classroom that you study or have studied in. v. 1
Describe a classroom that you study or have studied in. You should say: What part of the school or college it was in What it looked like What things were in it And say if you think the people who study there liked it or not. Model Answer: My primary school was in an urban area and the school was very nearer to a flowing river and the stunning natural beauty surrounded us.   When I was promoted to grade 3, we were transferred to a large class and that’s in my experience is the best classroom I have ever had even though I had classes in many ultramodern rooms later on. This classroom was on the North side of the school and there were 3-4 windows and 2 large doors in this class. We could see the flowing rivers and a part of hills from this classroom. This room has an ‘L’ shape and could accommodate more than 50 students. It looked similar to a large hall room except that it gave the impression of an urban house. The furniture of this room was locally built and was all wooden.   There was a large blackboard where the teachers used to write with the white chalks. Most of the students liked this room because of the fresh air it could provide to the students. The temperature during the summer was usually high and this room was amazingly soothing. The ceiling was unusually high (around 20 feet from the floor), unlike the rooms we see nowadays. We all loved to have classes in this room and the teachers were very careful to us about studies and that’s why even being a remote location and underfunded school, it could maintain a steady result each year. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a school you have studied. Describe an urban school you have visited. Describe a room you remember. Describe a memory from your childhood. Describe something you remember from your school life.
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Describe
a classroom that you study or have studied in. You should say: What part of the
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school
or college it was in What it looked like What things were in it And say if you
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think
the
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people
who study there liked it or not. Model Answer:

My primary
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school
was in an urban area and the
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school
was
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very
nearer to a flowing river and the stunning natural beauty surrounded us.
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When I
was promoted
to grade 3, we
were transferred
to a
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large
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class
and that’s in my experience is the best classroom I have ever had
even though
I had
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classes
in
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many
ultramodern
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rooms
later on. This classroom was on the North side of the
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school
and there were 3-4 windows and 2
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large
doors in this
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class
. We could
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see
the flowing rivers and a part of hills from this classroom. This
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room
has an ‘L’ shape and could accommodate more than 50 students. It looked similar to a
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large
hall
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room
except that it gave the impression of an urban
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house
. The furniture of this
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room
was
locally
built and was all wooden.
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
There was a
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large
blackboard where the teachers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to write with the white chalks. Most of the students liked this
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room
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because
of the fresh air it could provide to the students. The temperature during the summer was
usually
high and this
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room
was
amazingly
soothing. The ceiling was
unusually
high (around
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20 feet
from the floor), unlike the
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rooms
we
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see
nowadays. We all
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loved
to have
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classes
in this
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room
and the teachers were
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very
careful to us about studies and that’s why even being a remote location and underfunded
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school
, it could maintain a steady result each year. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a
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school
you have studied.
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Describe
an urban
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school
you have visited.
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Describe
a
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room
you remember.
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Describe
a memory from your childhood.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
something you remember from your
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school
life.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a classroom that you study or have studied in. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
350 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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