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Describe a school you have studied in. v.1

Describe a school you have studied in. v. 1
Describe a school you have studied in. You should say: where it is how long have you studied there what it looks like and explain what was the most attractive aspect of this school. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: Initially, I wasn’t very happy when my whole family moved to Hanoi City about a decade ago from Ho Chi Min city even though they told me the capital of Vietnam was a better city from the city of Ho Chi Min in every aspect. But, I had to agree with them at least for once when I started to study at one of the high schools in Hanoi. The high school, I attended, was a state-of-the-art institution and a "purpose-built" school which featured first-class facilities in order to support each and every one of its students. The school had specialist teaching facilities for science, art, drama, music and ICT on its huge 10-acre campus. The campus is consisted of 4 large, 3-storey buildings, adjacent to each other, with a huge empty space around them. The campus hosted an extensive library, auditorium, a theatre, indoor 25-meter swimming pool, a fully equipped indoor sports hall and additional outdoor playing surfaces for the students. The campus buildings were modern in its every sense with lovely champagne colour paintings both on its inside as well as the outside. I was lucky to have studied for three years at my favourite high school until I started my higher education. I liked pretty much each and everything about my high school in Hanoi, but the best aspect, which really set it apart from other schools, was that it probably had around 100 trees of different kinds of flowers inside its campus. Another thing, which I really liked about my school, was its huge swimming pool in which I used to swim at the end of my classes almost every day during the hot summer. Finally, the campus and its buildings were designed in such unique way that one could actually view the campus and its beautiful flower trees even from a mile away as if the buildings were really close to its distant viewers.   Model Answer 2: Saint Partick High School is one of the largest institutions in the Kingsly area and this is perhaps the best school in the entire town. I spent almost six years there and have had some wonderful memories. I would like to thank you for this excellent cue card topic.   Located at the South-east corner on the city map, Saint Patrick High School offers young students quality education and one of the best views in town from its premises. It was established almost one hundred years ago in an area which is more than 30 acres. The then-mayor, Mr Abel, finished establishing the metro rail system a few years earlier and that had made the communication to and from the school very convenient. This school always make endeavours to excel at all courses that are offered to students. It is one of the prominent and autonomous schools in our state with excellent academic results.   I got admitted to this school when I was around twelve years old. I studied there until I finished my high school diploma and will never forget my time there. I must admit I enjoyed my high school days thoroughly and thanks to the great masters who worked really hard for us.   The school is really big and the buildings are mostly two-storied and large enough. During my time, we had around three thousand students. The spectacular gardens and immaculately maintained yards, traditionally structured red and white buildings and large open space make it look more like a museum than a school.   I loved so many things in my school. I relished the rich collection of books the school library had, the large and green playground where I used to play every evening, the scenic beauty of it and so on. But the most attractive aspect of the school was the excellent teachers who used to teach us. The institution could not have been the best one without the dedication and hard work they have put in. I still remember how our teachers had been our mentor, leader and coach on the one hand, and yet friendly on the other hand. During my six years studentship in that alma mater, I have learned a lot and the credit goes to the teachers who had been so inspiring for us. Tips: Talking about 'where the school is', 'how long have you studied there' and 'what the school looks like' should be fairly easy if you can visualise a school where you have studied. However, explaining 'what was the most attractive aspect of this school' can be tricky to some extent. Here are some ideas for the last question of this cue card topic: 1. Individualized Instruction and Approaches to Students:   Students’ abilities and needs are different in a high school. To effectively teach all students, the school staff must reflect the needs of each, with the understanding of each as an individual. Our school teachers did exactly that and this made our school stand out in a crowd. 2. Feel Like Home:   A good school has such a welcoming and engaging environment that pupils would love to be there. This was precisely what we felt about our school. I missed my school even if I was absent due to sickness and I believe that was the most interesting and attractive aspect of our school. 3. Excellent Teachers and Staff:   A good school has an involved staff working together, pushing themselves and their students to be the best. In the end, the performance of students in exams, beyond school boundary and in the professional arena define how good a school is. Our school was one of the best schools in the country in terms of students' performance. Your ability to talk about the cue card topic "Describe a school you have studied in" would enable you to talk about the following topics as well: 1. Describe a school or college you have been to. 2. Describe a famous school you know about. 3. Describe an educational institute in your town/ village. 4. Describe a place you remember well in your hometown.
Describe
a
school
you have
studied
in. You should say: where it is how long have you
studied
there what it looks like and
explain
what was the most
attractive
aspect
of this
school
. [You will
have to
talk about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
Sample Answer 1:
Initially
, I wasn’t
very
happy when my whole family
moved
to Hanoi City about a decade ago from Ho Chi Min city
even though
they
told
me the capital of Vietnam was a better city from the city of Ho Chi Min in every
aspect
.
But
, I had to
agree
with them at least for once when I
started
to study at one of the
high
schools
in Hanoi.

The
high
school
, I attended, was a state-of-the-art institution and a
"
purpose-built
"
school
which featured
first
-
class
facilities in order to support
each and every one
of its
students
. The
school
had specialist teaching facilities for science, art, drama, music and ICT on its huge 10-acre
campus
.
The
campus
is consisted
of 4
large
, 3-storey
buildings
, adjacent to each other, with a huge empty space
around
them.
The
campus
hosted an extensive library, auditorium, a
theatre
, indoor 25-meter swimming pool, a
fully
equipped indoor sports hall and additional outdoor playing surfaces for the
students
.
The
campus
buildings
were modern in its every sense with lovely champagne
colour
paintings both on its inside as
well
as the outside. I was lucky to have
studied
for three years at my
favourite
high
school
until I
started
my higher education.

I liked pretty much each and everything about my
high
school
in Hanoi,
but
the
best
aspect
, which
really
set it apart from other
schools
, was that it
probably
had
around
100 trees of
different
kinds of flowers inside its
campus
. Another thing, which I
really
liked about my
school
, was its huge swimming pool in which I
used
to swim at the
end
of my classes almost every day during the hot summer.
Finally
, the
campus
and its
buildings
were designed
in such unique way that one could
actually
view the
campus
and its
beautiful
flower trees even from a mile away as if the
buildings
were
really
close to its distant viewers.
 
Model Answer 2: Saint
Partick
High
School
is one of the largest institutions in the
Kingsly
area and this is perhaps the
best
school
in the entire town. I spent almost six years there and have had
some
wonderful memories. I would like to thank you for this
excellent
cue card
topic
.
 
Located at the South-east corner on the city map, Saint Patrick
High
School
offers young
students
quality education and one of the
best
views in town from its premises. It
was established
almost one hundred years ago in an area which is more than 30 acres. The then-mayor, Mr Abel, finished establishing the metro rail system a few years earlier and that had made the communication to and from the
school
very
convenient. This
school
always
make
endeavours
to excel at all courses that
are offered
to
students
. It is one of the prominent and autonomous
schools
in our state with
excellent
academic results.
 
I
got
admitted to this
school
when I was
around
twelve years
old
. I
studied
there until I finished my
high
school
diploma and will never forget my time there.
I
must
admit I enjoyed my
high
school
days
thoroughly
and thanks to the great masters who worked
really
hard
for us.
 
The
school
is
really
big
and the
buildings
are
mostly
two-storied and
large
enough
. During my time, we had
around
three thousand
students
. The spectacular gardens and
immaculately
maintained yards,
traditionally
structured red and white
buildings
and
large
open space
make
it look more like a museum than a
school
.
 
I
loved
so
many
things in my
school
. I relished the rich collection of books the
school
library had, the
large
and green playground where I
used
to play every evening, the scenic beauty of it and
so
on.
But
the most
attractive
aspect
of the
school
was the
excellent
teachers
who
used
to teach us. The institution could not have been the
best
one without the dedication and
hard
work they have put in. I
still
remember how our
teachers
had been our mentor, leader and coach on the one hand, and
yet
friendly
on the other hand
. During my six years studentship in that alma mater, I have learned a lot and the credit goes to the
teachers
who had been
so
inspiring for us.

Tips: Talking about 'where the
school
is', 'how long have you
studied
there' and 'what the
school
looks like' should be
fairly
easy if you can
visualise
a
school
where you have
studied
.
However
, explaining 'what was the most
attractive
aspect
of this school' can be tricky to
some
extent. Here are
some
ideas
for the last question of this cue card
topic: 1
. Individualized Instruction and Approaches to
Students
:
 
Students’
abilities and needs are
different
in a
high
school
. To
effectively
teach all
students
, the
school
staff
must
reflect the needs of each, with the understanding of each as an individual. Our
school
teachers
did exactly that and this made our
school
stand out in a crowd.

2. Feel Like Home:
 
A
good
school
has such a welcoming and engaging environment that pupils would
love
to be there. This was
precisely
what we felt about our
school
. I missed my
school
even if I was absent due to sickness and I believe that was the most interesting and
attractive
aspect
of our
school. 3
.
Excellent
Teachers
and Staff:
 
A
good
school
has an involved staff working together, pushing themselves and their
students
to be the
best
. In the
end
, the performance of
students
in exams, beyond
school
boundary and in the professional arena define how
good
a
school
is. Our
school
was one of the
best
schools
in the country in terms of students' performance.

Your ability to talk about the cue card
topic
"
Describe
a
school
you have
studied
in
"
would enable you to talk about the following
topics
as
well
: 1.
Describe
a
school
or college you have been to.

2.
Describe
a
famous
school
you know
about.

3.
Describe
an educational institute in your town/ village.

4.
Describe
a place you remember
well
in your hometown.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
131Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a school you have studied in. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
11 paragraphs
1087 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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