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Describe a quality you really admire. v.1

Describe a quality you really admire. v. 1
Describe a quality you really admire. You should say: what it is how this quality helps how difficult it is to acquire And explain why you admire this quality. Model Answer: Honesty is the quality I admire most and I believe that honesty is the mantra towards a corruption-free happy world. To me, honesty is a quality that involves being honest in every way of life. Honesty is considered to be the most important virtue as this quality ensures a balance and authentically structured society where each member would work together towards a better world. The virtues and good qualities are deeply rooted with honesty. Only an honest person can be truthful, brave and benevolent. A dishonest person will start acquiring other vile characteristics and with time, s/he would become a corrupted and harmful person in every sphere of life. Honesty makes a man brave and happy. A dishonest person can't be truly happy and contended. This is indeed a difficult quality to acquire if that was not rooted from the early childhood of a person. The society and circumstances offer many attractions and denying all of those devilish attractions and greed is something an honest person would do. To me, this is the first and foremost important quality a good person must have.      Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a good quality one of your friends has. Describe an important quality someone needs for success. Describe a unique quality someone in your family has. Describe an admiring quality you have.
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a
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quality
you
really
admire. You should say: what it is how this
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quality
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helps
how difficult it is to acquire And
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explain
why you admire this
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quality
. Model Answer:

Honesty is the
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quality
I admire most and I believe that
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honesty
is the mantra towards a corruption-free happy world. To me,
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honesty
is a
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quality
that involves being honest in every way of life.
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Honesty
is considered
to be the most
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important
virtue as this
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quality
ensures a balance and
authentically
structured society where each member would work together towards a better world. The virtues and
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good
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qualities
are
deeply
rooted with
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honesty
.
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Only
an honest
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person
can be truthful, brave and benevolent. A dishonest
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person
will
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start
acquiring other vile characteristics and with time, s/he would become a corrupted and harmful
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person
in every sphere of life.
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Honesty
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makes
a
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man
brave and happy. A dishonest
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person
can't be
truly
happy and contended. This is
indeed
a difficult
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quality
to acquire if that was not rooted from the early childhood of a
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person
. The society and circumstances offer
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many
attractions and denying all of those devilish attractions and greed is something an honest
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person
would do. To me, this is the
first
and foremost
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important
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quality
a
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good
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person
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must
have.
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Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
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Describe
a
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good
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quality
one of your friends has.
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Describe
an
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important
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quality
someone needs for success.
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Describe
a unique
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quality
someone in your family has.
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Describe
an admiring
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quality
you have.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a quality you really admire. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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