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ABC Bakery & Confectionery Private Enterprise, also known as ABC Bakery is a bakery chain based in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam.

ABC Bakery & Confectionery Private Enterprise, also known as ABC Bakery is a bakery chain based in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam. nEng2
1. ABC Bakery & Confectionery Private Enterprise, also known as ABC Bakery is a bakery chain based in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam. 2. The founder of ABC Bakery is Mr Kao Sieu Luc who has 30 years of experience in the/ make bread. 3 Since its establishment, it has become one of the most popular bakery chains in Ho Chi Minh City, Nha Trang, Can Tho and other cities. 4. Vietnamese people are now very familiar with its variety of products such as bread, pastries, cakes and many more. 5 Its new product – dragon fruit bread is a great idea to help farmers who are affected by the corona virus outbreak.
1. ABC Bakery & Confectionery Private Enterprise,
also
known as ABC Bakery is a bakery chain based in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam.

2. The founder of ABC Bakery is Mr
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Kao
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Sieu
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Luc
who has 30 years of experience in the/
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make
bread.

3 Since its establishment, it has become one of the most popular bakery chains in Ho Chi Minh City,
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Nha
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Trang
, Can Tho and other cities.

4. Vietnamese
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people
are
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now
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very
familiar with its variety of products such as bread, pastries, cakes and
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many
more.

5 Its new product
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–
dragon fruit bread is a great
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idea
to
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help
farmers who are
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affected
by the
The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
corona virus
outbreak.
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IELTS speaking ABC Bakery & Confectionery Private Enterprise, also known as ABC Bakery is a bakery chain based in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam.

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5 paragraphs
113 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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