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"Wouldn't it be ni. . . "My husband doesn't know how to use a shotgun? " Immediately, my arms convulse and I raise my foot towards the ceiling to take a couple of steps back. I am choking. I don't know how many of my cells, molecules, electrons, protons, neutrons, etc have gone through my body, but two seconds ago, I had just seen myself as a husband, taking a two-months-old shot gun and cocking it. Boom. Bang. Bam. BANG! and BAM! "Thank. . . ce if we knew the future yesterday, " a change of voice could be easily heard from the end of the long table. The usual ceaseless chatter became quiet, everyone kept listenting to what the younger Mr. Zhang had to say. He was the one to hold away the most comprehensive report. "Those that destroyed the world must be tied a thousand times, " said Mr. Zhang, "The carbon foot print we have made, kept expanding and expanding, finally covering the bond and main areas of life between the plants and the planet. " Everyone fell silent.
"
Wouldn't it be
ni
.
.
.


"
My husband doesn't know how to
use
a shotgun?
"


Immediately, my arms convulse and I raise my foot towards the ceiling to take a couple of steps
back
.

I am choking. I don't know how
many
of my cells, molecules, electrons, protons, neutrons, etc have gone through my body,
but
two seconds ago, I had
just
seen
myself as a husband, taking a two-months-
old
shot gun and cocking it.

Boom.

Bang.

Bam
.

BANG!

and
BAM!

"
Thank
.
.
.
ce
if we knew the future yesterday,
"
a
change
of voice could be
easily
heard from the
end
of the long table. The usual ceaseless chatter became quiet, everyone
kept
listenting
to what the younger Mr. Zhang had to say. He was the one to hold away the most comprehensive report.

"
Those that
destroyed
the world
must
be tied
a thousand times,
"
said Mr. Zhang,
"
The carbon foot print we have made,
kept
expanding and expanding,
finally
covering the bond and main areas of life between the plants and the planet.
"


Everyone fell silent.
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IELTS speaking speak about people you love the most

Speaking
  American English
12 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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