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Write a letter to the manager of plane describe the item you cost explain how you lost tell the manager what you like them to do

Write a letter to the manager of plane describe the item you cost explain how you lost tell the manager what you like them to do lxMOX
Dear Sir or MadamI am writing to inform that I recently lost my mobile phone while flying in a plane. Mobile phone is red and cost $1100 when my parents had bought it there months ago. It has a regulation of 18 megapixels and was in a red leather case with my name on it. I lost it when I was watching TV with my friends in the plane and my friend and I went to order juice. I had left my phone on the table at that time. We had been at the for around 20 minutes. I did not have a phone when I came. I look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully Nilufar Perdebaeva
Dear Sir or
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MadamI
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am
writing to inform that I recently lost my mobile
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phone
while flying in a
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plane
. Mobile
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phone
is red
and cost $1100 when my parents had
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bought
it there months ago. It has a regulation of 18 megapixels and was in a red leather case with my name on it. I lost it when I was watching TV with my friends in the
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plane
and my friend and I went to order juice. I had
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left
my
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phone
on the table at that time. We had been at the for around 20 minutes. I did not have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
when I came. I look forward to hearing from you. Your
faithfully
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Nilufar
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Perdebaeva
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of plane describe the item you cost explain how you lost tell the manager what you like them to do

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  American English
1 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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