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yourneighbour keeps his animal in his gardenand they create problem for you.you and your family have problems with them.write a letter to your neighbour.

yourneighbour keeps his animal in his gardenand they create problem for you. you and your family have problems with them. write a letter to your neighbour. KGDyM
Dear James, I hope you are doing well. The purpose of this writing is to bring towards an outgoing issue. As we are neighbours for over a decade and share a mutual relationship, i hope you will ponder over the situation. Jerry, your dog, is indeed an adorable animal. As we have overlapping gardens, he often crosses his fence and enter my territory. Although you tamed him well but still he destroy my garden by plucking flowers and eroding soil. Moreover, upon arrivals of my guests, he barks on them and try to attack them. Therefore, i request you to control his actions. It would be better if you tie him with his belt or keep him in the cage. Additionally, you could put him a separete dog house as you already own it. It would be really nice of you if you enroll him in some training center to manage his tempramental attitude. I am looking forward for positive response from your side and hope for fruitful results soon. If the things doesnot move towards betterment, I am afraid i will have to complain in society`s office. They will then handle the matter accordingly. Will be waiting for your prompt reply. Yours sincerely, jenny
Dear James,

I hope you are doing well. The purpose of this writing is to bring towards an outgoing issue. As we are
neighbours
for over a decade and share a mutual relationship,
i
hope you will ponder over the situation.

Jerry, your dog, is
indeed
an adorable animal. As we have overlapping gardens, he
often
crosses his fence and enter my territory. Although you tamed him well
but
still
he
destroy
my garden by plucking flowers and eroding soil.
Moreover
, upon arrivals of my guests, he barks on them and try to attack them.
Therefore
,
i
request you to control his actions.

It would be better if you tie him with his belt or
keep
him in the cage.
Additionally
, you could put him a
separete
dog
house
as you already
own
it. It would be
really
nice of you if you enroll him in
some
training center to manage his
tempramental
attitude.

I am looking forward for
positive
response from your side and hope for fruitful results
soon
. If the things
doesnot
move
towards betterment, I am afraid
i
will
have to
complain in
society`s
office. They will then handle the matter
accordingly
.

Will be waiting for your prompt reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

jenny
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IELTS letter yourneighbour keeps his animal in his gardenand they create problem for you. you and your family have problems with them. write a letter to your neighbour.

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  American English
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