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You live in Ho Chi Minh city. You just took a trip to Ha Long Bay with an EngLish friend named Daisy. You received an email from her after she returned to LonDon. Read the part of her email below. …… I hope you like the photos we took in Ha Long Bay. Did you get home all right? I’m back at work now, but it’s a bit difficutl to start again. I wish we were still on holiday. Why don’t we plan aother trip this spring if you’ve got time and money? Any suggestions where could you go? …… Daisy

You live in Ho Chi Minh city. You just took a trip to Ha Long Bay with an EngLish friend named Daisy. You received an email from her after she returned to LonDon. Read the part of her email below. …… I hope you like the photos we took in Ha Long Bay. Did you get home all right? I’m back at work now, but it’s a bit difficutl to start again. I wish we were still on holiday. Why don’t we plan aother trip this spring if you’ve got time and money? Any suggestions where could you go? …… Daisy xDKEg
Dear Daisy, I’m so delighted to receive your email. I hope you are doing fine and having a great week ahead. I got home alright but, just like you, I feel a little bit spiritually difficult to get back to work. I really love the photos we took in HaLong Bay. Some of them you snapped are absolutely stunning like a skillful photographer. It remind me of the unforgetable time we got together during our great trip. Until now, I still can't believe how I forgot that I kept your ticket in my luggage. We couldn’t find it anywhere but my bag. Fortunately, we could finally manage to check in. I am very excited about the plan for our coming spring trip. I am considering DaNang or DaLat, and do you have any ideas? What is your preference? Let's have further discussion to plan for our up coming trip in the next email. Best wishes, Song
Dear Daisy,

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delighted to receive your email. I hope you are doing fine and having a great week ahead.
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I
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got
home alright
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but
,
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just
like you, I feel a
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little bit
spiritually
difficult to
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get
back to work.

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I
really
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love
the photos we took in
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HaLong
Bay.
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Some
of them you snapped are
absolutely
stunning like a skillful photographer. It
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remind
me of the
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unforgetable
time we
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got
together during our great trip. Until
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now
, I
still
can't believe how I forgot that I
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kept
your ticket in my luggage. We couldn’t find it anywhere
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but
my bag.
Fortunately
, we could
finally
manage to
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check
in.

I am
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very
excited about the plan for our coming spring trip. I am considering
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DaNang
or
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DaLat
, and do you have any
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ideas
? What is your preference?
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Let
's have
further
discussion to plan for our up coming trip in the
next
email.

Best wishes,

Song
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IELTS letter You live in Ho Chi Minh city. You just took a trip to Ha Long Bay with an EngLish friend named Daisy. You received an email from her after she returned to LonDon. Read the part of her email below. …… I hope you like the photos we took in Ha Long Bay. Did you get home all right? I’m back at work now, but it’s a bit difficutl to start again. I wish we were still on holiday. Why don’t we plan aother trip this spring if you’ve got time and money? Any suggestions where could you go? …… Daisy

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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