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You live in Ho Chi Minh city. You just took a trip to Ha Long Bay with an EngLish friend named Daisy. You received an email from her after she returned to LonDon. Read the part of her email below. …… I hope you like the photos we took in Ha Long Bay. Did you get home all right? I’m back at work now, but it’s a bit difficutl to start again. I wish we were still on holiday. Why don’t we plan aother trip this spring if you’ve got time and money? Any suggestions where could you go? …… Daisy

You live in Ho Chi Minh city. You just took a trip to Ha Long Bay with an EngLish friend named Daisy. You received an email from her after she returned to LonDon. Read the part of her email below. …… I hope you like the photos we took in Ha Long Bay. Did you get home all right? I’m back at work now, but it’s a bit difficutl to start again. I wish we were still on holiday. Why don’t we plan aother trip this spring if you’ve got time and money? Any suggestions where could you go? …… Daisy xDKEg

Dear Daisy, I’m so delighted to receive your email. I hope you are doing fine and having a great week ahead. I got home alright but, just like you, I feel a little bit spiritually difficult to get back to work. I really love the photos we took in HaLong Bay. Some of them you snapped are absolutely stunning like a skillful photographer. It remind me of the unforgetable time we got together during our great trip. Until now, I still can't believe how I forgot that I kept your ticket in my luggage. We couldn’t find it anywhere but my bag. Fortunately, we could finally manage to check in. I am very excited about the plan for our coming spring trip. I am considering DaNang or DaLat, and do you have any ideas? What is your preference? Let's have further discussion to plan for our up coming trip in the next email. Best wishes, Song

Dear Daisy,

I’m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 delighted to receive your email. I hope you are doing fine and having a great week ahead. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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got
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but
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just
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little bit
spiritually
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get
 back to work.

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love
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Some
 of them you snapped are absolutely
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remind
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unforgetable
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got
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now
, I still
 can't believe how I forgot that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 your ticket in my luggage. We couldn’t find it anywhere This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my bag. Fortunately
, we could finally
 manage to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 in.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited about the plan for our coming spring trip. I am considering Possible spelling mistake found.DatingDancingDiningBananaDaringDana
DaNang
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DaLat
, and do you have any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
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Let
's have further
 discussion to plan for our up coming trip in the next
 email.

Best wishes,

Song

IELTS letter You live in Ho Chi Minh city. You just took a trip to Ha Long Bay with an EngLish friend named Daisy. You received an email from her after she returned to LonDon. Read the part of her email below. …… I hope you like the photos we took in Ha Long Bay. Did you get home all right? I’m back at work now, but it’s a bit difficutl to start again. I wish we were still on holiday. Why don’t we plan aother trip this spring if you’ve got time and money? Any suggestions where could you go? …… Daisy

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

155 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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