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Letter to an authority about a short circuit

Letter to an authority about a short circuit MlDXe

Dear sir, My name is jay dev juyal and I am writing this letter due to the unavailability of electrical supply at my house. Yesterday, rained heavily and a nearby transformer got a short circuit, after that, it was not turn on. I and neighbours notified the electrical division about the short circuit, they replied that "they will fix it by morning", it is 8 o'clock in evening now but it is still in the same condition. None of the electrical people reported here till now. We are out of electrical supply and not able to do anything at home because all our appliances are connected to electricity solely. Kindly connect with the local electrical department and sort out the issue as early as possible. To go to a higher authority will be my next stage and a complaint will be registered against both of the sections. Thanks

Dear sir,

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juyal and
 I am writing this letter due to the unavailability of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelectronicmechanicalcomputerizedautomaticroboticmechanized
electrical
 supply at my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Yesterday, rained heavily
 and a nearby transformer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a short circuit, after that, it was not turn on.

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neighbours
 notified the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelectronicmechanicalcomputerizedautomaticroboticmechanized
electrical
 division about the short circuit, they replied that Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it by morningUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
, it is 8 o'clock in evening This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is still
 in the same condition. None of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelectronicmechanicalcomputerizedautomaticroboticmechanized
electrical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 reported here till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. We are out of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelectronicmechanicalcomputerizedautomaticroboticmechanized
electrical
 supply and not able to do anything at home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 all our appliances are connected
 to electricity solely
.

Kindly connect with the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelectronicmechanicalcomputerizedautomaticroboticmechanized
electrical
 department and sort out the issue as early as possible. To go to a higher authority will be my next
 stage and a complaint will be registered
 against both of the sections.

Thanks