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Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time. Applying writing to:

Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time. Applying writing to: mbjM1
Dear Sir, I am a sophomore at the University of Information Technology. I recently saw an advertisement for your course on improving memory. I would like to know more information about the course. One of my problems is that I find it is too difficult to memorize the important facts, particularly for my major academic subjects, and it is not easy to bear in mind the complex figures as well. I realized that I made the effort to concentrate to remember even the pieces of information, but my mind went blank after some days. So I have to note down the stickers and make reminders through my phone. Although It spent a lot of time, it was the only way to help me remember things. I have heard about visualization and association methods, but I do not know how to apply that technique effectively and I would be very interested in the other strategies from your course. It is my pleasure to know more detailed information about the methods, as well as the costs and dates of your course. I am a full-time student and I am not sure about my free time, so I hope you can offer flexible time. I await your response and the course with great expectation. Yours faithfully, Anne Pham
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an advertisement for your
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on improving memory. I would like to know more
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. One of my problems is that I find it is too difficult to memorize the
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facts,
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for my major academic subjects, and it is not easy to bear in mind the complex figures
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,
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but
my mind went blank after
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days.
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note down the stickers and
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reminders through my phone. Although It spent
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time, it was the
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only
way to
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help
me remember things. I have heard about visualization and association methods,
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but
I do not know how to apply that technique
effectively
and I would be
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very
interested in the other strategies from your
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course
. It is my pleasure to know more detailed
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information
about the methods,
as well
as the costs and dates of your
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course
. I am a full-time
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student and
I am not sure about my free time,
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so
I hope you can offer flexible time. I await your response and the
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course
with great expectation. Yours
faithfully
, Anne
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IELTS letter Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time. Applying writing to:

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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