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read this email from your English - speaking friend Sandy and the notes you have made

read this email from your English - speaking friend Sandy and the notes you have made gGob7

Dear Sandy, Glad to get an email! How are yu? How's everything? I'm really exciting because I can stay with you for a week. I want we have more fun and I know you're interested in rock music so I think we'll go to the rock concert in our town. I think we shouldn't go climning in the moutain. I know climbing in the moutain it's good for our health but it is too dangerous and we can fall of when we are needless so we shouldn't climbing in the moutain. Can you drive me to your house? Because yesterday my motobike was broken! Write to mee soon? Love, Maria

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. Can you drive me to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
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motobike
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Love
, Maria