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Dear Mr James,
I am writing to you regarding my request to work for a half year in our head quarter in Germany. Please allow me to elaborate.
As you know, I have recently been prompted to a position of “production manager”. We are receiving a new German technology that will replace our current one, which will help us expedite the production process while reducing the operational costs. A training of 6 months is provided in the head office in Germany to help master the new machine and how to use it effectively to maximize our profits and reducing our costs. I do belive that the training would be of a great benefit to our company.
Regarding my duties, I will be delegating them to Peter, my assistant, during my absence and also I’d be available for any emergencies through my e-mail.
I’d apprciate your assistance to approve my request to send an email to our head office to request them to arrange the training with a professional engineer.
I look forward to hearing from you soon, and thank you for your attention to this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Bishoy Yousef
Dear Mr James,
I am writing to you regarding my request to work for a half year in our head quarter in Germany. me to elaborate.
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Regarding my duties, I will be delegating them to Peter, my assistant, during my absence and
I’d your assistance to approve my request to our head office to request them to arrange the training with a professional engineer.
I look forward to hearing from you, and thank you for your attention to this matter.
Yours
Yousef
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