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Dear Mr James, I am writing to you regarding my request to work for a half year in our head quarter in Germany. Please allow me to elaborate. As you know, I have recently been prompted to a position of “production manager”. We are receiving a new German technology that will replace our current one, which will help us expedite the production process while reducing the operational costs. A training of 6 months is provided in the head office in Germany to help master the new machine and how to use it effectively to maximize our profits and reducing our costs. I do belive that the training would be of a great benefit to our company. Regarding my duties, I will be delegating them to Peter, my assistant, during my absence and also I’d be available for any emergencies through my e-mail. I’d apprciate your assistance to approve my request to send an email to our head office to request them to arrange the training with a professional engineer. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and thank you for your attention to this matter. Yours sincerely, Bishoy Yousef

Dear Mr James,

I am writing to you regarding my request to work for a half year in our head quarter in Germany. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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allow
 me to elaborate.

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 to a position of “production manager”. We are receiving a new German technology that will replace our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 one, which will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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help
 master the new machine and how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it effectively
 to maximize our profits and reducing our costs. I Did you mean "do believe"?do believe
do belive
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.

Regarding my duties, I will be delegating them to Peter, my assistant, during my absence and also
 I’d be available for any emergencies through my e-mail.

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apprciate
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send an email to
 our head office to request them to arrange the training with a professional engineer.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, and thank you for your attention to this matter.

Yours sincerely
,

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Bishoy
 Yousef