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Your internet connectivity works very slowly. Write a letter to complain • Introduce yourself • Describe difficulties you face • Say what you decide if the difficulty persists

Your internet connectivity works very slowly. Write a letter to complain • Introduce yourself • Describe difficulties you face • Say what you decide if the difficulty persists k5xJ8
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction towards poor service with regards to bandwidth of web connection. My name is Kosha Thakkar and I am living in west Ahmedabad. My complaint number is 2810PK1996. The issue has been registered since week still there is no solution. I am full time student and part time intern. There are online classes and duties everyday but awful slowness of internet create several hurdles such as not able to complete the work assignments because my documents do not turn in time. In addition to this I am not able to understand the topic in lecture due to constant breakdown of internet. I would like you to take cognizance of the matter and get it fix as soon as possible. If this situation will not resolve then second thought will take place about switching the service provider who gives satisfactory data speed followed by great quality of after services. I hope you will take this difficulties seriously and will take necessary actions. Yours faithfully, Kosha Thakkar.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction towards poor service
with regards to
bandwidth of web connection. My name is
Kosha
Thakkar and
I am living in west Ahmedabad. My complaint number is 2810PK1996.

The issue has
been registered
since week
still
there is no solution. I am full time student and
part time
intern. There are online classes and duties
everyday
but
awful slowness of internet create several hurdles such as not able to complete the work assignments
because
my documents do not turn in time.
In addition
to this I am not able to understand the topic in lecture due to constant breakdown of internet.

I would like you to take cognizance of the matter and
get
it
fix
as
soon
as possible. If this situation
will not resolve
then second
thought
will take place about switching the service provider who gives satisfactory data speed followed by great quality of after services.

I hope you will take
this
difficulties
seriously
and will take necessary actions.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kosha
Thakkar
.
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IELTS letter Your internet connectivity works very slowly. Write a letter to complain • Introduce yourself • Describe difficulties you face • Say what you decide if the difficulty persists

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
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