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you want to apply for the following job.write a letter to MrMoore describing your previous experience and explaining why would be suitable for the job. waiter for evening work. Some experience necessary

you want to apply for the following job. write a letter to MrMoore describing your previous experience and explaining why would be suitable for the job. waiter for evening work. Some experience necessary 3x0oJ
Dear Mr Moore, I am writing this letter to apply for the position of "waiter" advertised in the Times of India on June 6th 2020. I have one year of experience as a tour guide. I worked as a tour guide in one of the small organization from June 2019 to July 2020 as a part-timer for a year. My responsibility is to interacting with the tourist people and explaining and understanding them about the historical places. Unfortunately, I am a student at Oxford University, I am looking for evening work and timings would suitable to me Moreover I am interested in this job, I am suitable for this position because I have excellent communication and a sociable person. I believe I would be a suitable candidate for this position and Kindly go through my attached resume. Please arrange the interview at your earliest inconvenience. Looking forward to your reply Yours sincerely, XYZ
Dear Mr Moore,

I am writing this letter to apply for the position of
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waiter
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advertised in
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the Times of India
on June 6th 2020.

I have one year of experience as a tour guide.

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I
worked as a tour guide in one of the
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small
organization from June 2019 to July 2020 as a part-timer for a year.

My responsibility is
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to interacting
with the tourist
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people
and explaining and understanding them about the historical places.

Unfortunately, I am a student at Oxford University, I am looking for evening work and timings would suitable to me
Moreover
I
am interested
in this job, I am suitable for this position
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because
I have excellent communication and a sociable person.

I believe I would be a suitable candidate for this position and Kindly go through my attached resume.
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Please
arrange the interview at your earliest inconvenience.

Looking forward to your reply

Yours
sincerely
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter you want to apply for the following job. write a letter to MrMoore describing your previous experience and explaining why would be suitable for the job. waiter for evening work. Some experience necessary

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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