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You are organising a wedding party . Write a letter to Mr Joseph

You are organising a wedding party. Write a letter to Mr Joseph NVw5d
Dear Mr Joseph. I am please to inform you that you are cordially invite to my sister wedding party. This wedding party will be organized on 25 th January 2022 at our local traditional " Shadiyana" place. A lunch has arrenged in between wedding party to make it more enjoyable. Please confirm your awailability on or before idatel by contacting us at contact number or by emailing us at email@azuref1991. We look forward to your presence on the wedding party. Your sincerelyAbdulhamidova Feruza.
Dear Mr Joseph. I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
to inform you that you are
cordially
Consider using a past participle here: "invited".
invite
to my sister
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wedding
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party
. This
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wedding
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party
will
be organized
on
Did you mean "25th"?
25 th
January 2022 at our local traditional
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"
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Shadiyana
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"
place. A lunch has
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arrenged
in between
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wedding
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party
to
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make
it more enjoyable.
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Please
confirm your
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awailability
on or
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before
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idatel
by contacting us at contact number or by emailing us at email@azuref1991. We look forward to your presence on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wedding
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
. Your
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sincerelyAbdulhamidova
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Feruza
.
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IELTS letter You are organising a wedding party. Write a letter to Mr Joseph

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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