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You are organizing a family party. Write a letter to your friend inviting him or her to attend the party in your letter.

You are organizing a family party. Write a letter to your friend inviting him or her to attend the party in your letter. bE29Y
Dear Nigora. I am writing this letter to personally invite you and your other rest of family to our annual day that will held on 23rd of October at 8p. m at our residence. It will begin at half past seven in the evening. At the event dance and singing will be performed by famous artists. We have also arranged a delicious dinner at this event. Please confirm your presence by contacting us at 6402646. We look forward to meet you at the party and bless the couples. kind regards Khilola.
Dear
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Nigora
. I am writing this letter to
personally
invite you and your other rest of family to our annual day that will held on 23rd of October at 8p.
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m
at our residence. It will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
at half past seven in the evening. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
dance and singing will
be performed
by
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famous
artists. We have
also
arranged a delicious dinner at this
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event
.
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Please
confirm your presence by contacting us at 6402646. We look forward to
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meet
you at the party and bless the couples.
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kind
regards
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Khilola
.

IELTS letter You are organizing a family party. Write a letter to your friend inviting him or her to attend the party in your letter.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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