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Your telephone has been cut off. It may have been caused by a recent storm. Although you have reported the problem twice, nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the telephone company explaining the situation the situation and asking them to repair the line as soon as possible.

Your telephone has been cut off. It may have been caused by a recent storm. Although you have reported the problem twice, nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the telephone company explaining the situation the situation and asking them to repair the line as soon as possible. VywgA
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing the letter to inquire the last telephone statement. My telephone has not working of the happened recent storm sine now. My families and I could not talk with together for 2 days after recent disaster because all my home connection such as telephone and cellphone are out of network. Furthermore, I went to your central office two times and reported my issue. But they did not do any action by them till now. Surly, my families are worried about me and either am I. it is urgent for me to know their last status. I expect you to follow up on my issue and investigate why my connection does not repair yet and ask your employees to solve my telephone problem as soon as possible. It can help me to easily endure this situation. Your kind support in this regard is appreciated. Your faithfully, Babak Ashtiani
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing the letter to inquire the last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
telephone
statement. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
telephone
has not working of the happened recent storm sine
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. My families and I could not talk with together for 2 days after recent disaster
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because
all my home connection such as
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telephone
and cellphone are out of network.
Furthermore
, I went to your central office two times and reported my issue.
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But
they did not do any action by them till
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. Surly, my families
are worried
about me and either am I. it is urgent for me to know their last status.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
you to follow up on my issue and investigate why my connection does not repair
yet
and ask your employees to solve my
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telephone
problem as
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soon
as possible. It can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to
easily
endure this situation.

Your kind support in this regard
is appreciated
.

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Your
faithfully
,

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Babak
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Ashtiani
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IELTS letter Your telephone has been cut off. It may have been caused by a recent storm. Although you have reported the problem twice, nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the telephone company explaining the situation the situation and asking them to repair the line as soon as possible.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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