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Letter to the bank manager complaining about the bad service.

Letter to the bank manager complaining about the bad service. pLy23

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in concern to my mobile-banking services offered by the bank. The issue has been became worst as I am not able to utilise the services catalog offered by the bank in the application. First and foremost, I am a frequent user of digital services offered by the bank. The services catalog was working pretty good before the last update as all the services were available on the first screen. I could select and perform certain operations without any hassle using the bookmarked selection of processes. With the new update on the application, the user experience has become very complex and I cannot even found my existing settings on the tips. It is difficult to use the application after the new upgrade as it always sends out network issue notifications and I am not able to pay the vendor bills due to this inconvenience. I would recommend to improve the application release process and test the impact thoroughly before releasing to the end-users. I would like to request for a prompt resolution to my problem. Yours faithfully, Shivi Kashyap July 03, 2021

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in concern to my mobile-banking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 offered by the bank. The issue has been Consider using a past participle here: "become".become
became
 worst as I am not able to Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.utilize
utilise
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 catalog offered by the bank in the application.

First
 and foremost, I am a frequent user of digital You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 offered by the bank. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 catalog was working pretty This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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before
 the last update as all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 were available on the first
 screen. I could select and perform certain operations without any hassle using the bookmarked selection of processes. With the new update on the application, the user experience has become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 complex and I cannot even This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
found
 my existing settings on the tips.

It is difficult to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the application after the new upgrade as it always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmits
sends
 out network issue Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).notifications, and
notifications and
 I am not able to pay the vendor bills due to this inconvenience. I would recommend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the application release process and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 the impact thoroughly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 releasing to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
-users.

I would like to request for a prompt resolution to my problem.

Yours faithfully
,

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Shivi
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Kashyap
 July 03, 2021