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Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher for extra help Explain why your son needs help Ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods And suggest a possible schedule for the lessons

Dear Ms. Martha, I am writing to request your help to give extra French classes to my son Joe. He has chosen French as an additional language at school, however, he is finding it difficult to adapt the phonetic and the pronunciation of the language. Additionally, he has not been scoring well in the subject for the last year, hence I believe personalized training might help him grasp the language better. It would be great if you could share the details regarding your teaching experience. Moreover, can you please update me if you conduct the online sessions? These details will help me to plan for Joe’s extra classes accordingly. If you find it possible to assist in this matter, I would recommend you to plan the tuitions on weekends because I will only be available to devote some time on Saturdays and Sundays due to my work commitments on other days. I look forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, John Matt
Dear Ms. Martha,

I am writing to request your
help
to give extra French classes to my son Joe.

He has chosen French as an additional language at school,
however
, he is finding it difficult to adapt the phonetic and the pronunciation of the language.
Additionally
, he has not been scoring well in the subject for the last year,
hence
I believe personalized training might
help
him grasp the language better.

It would be great if you could share the
details
regarding your teaching experience.
Moreover
, can you
please
update me if you conduct the online sessions? These
details
will
help
me to plan for Joe’s extra classes
accordingly
.

If you find it possible to assist in this matter, I would recommend you to plan the
tuitions on
weekends
because
I will
only
be available to devote
some
time on Saturdays and Sundays due to my work commitments on other days.

I look forward to your
positive
response.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Matt
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IELTS letter Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher for extra help Explain why your son needs help Ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods And suggest a possible schedule for the lessons

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
161 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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