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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear manager, This letter is to bring your kind attention to my visit to your hotel this Saturday for seminar on Canadian education. I might have forgotten my documents at the conference hall. Those are my original degree documents of Bachelor of Arts, which I need currently. I was very relaxed until yesterday when I realised that I left my file where Canadian representatives were seated. I was very engrossed learning about different colleges that I didn’t notice my file was missing. I think it is in the counter number (18) in the ground floor where team of Northern college was sitting. I spent over an hour there, it must b lying on the table exclusively. Those documents are extremely crucial for getting admitted to masters, without them it won’t be possible. It is last day of submission of documents tomorrow or else I might lose this opportunity of studying in my favourite college. I require those by tomorrow urgently. I request you to please look in the lost and found department it might be lying there. I can be contacted on 01234567890 whenever your team finds my file. I will myself come to recieve them. I would be immensely happy for your quick response. Yours thankfully Nida
Dear manager, This letter is to bring your kind attention to my visit to your hotel this Saturday for seminar on Canadian education. I might have forgotten my
documents
at the conference hall. Those are my original degree
documents
of Bachelor of Arts, which I need
currently
.

I was
very
relaxed until yesterday when I
realised
that I
left
my file where Canadian representatives
were seated
. I was
very
engrossed learning about
different
colleges that I didn’t notice my file was missing.
I
think
it is in the counter number (18) in the
ground floor
where team of Northern college was sitting.
I
spent over an hour there, it
must
b lying on the table exclusively.

Those
documents
are
extremely
crucial for getting admitted to masters, without
them
it won’t be possible. It is last day of submission of
documents
tomorrow or else I might lose this opportunity of studying in my
favourite
college. I require those by tomorrow
urgently
. I request you to
please
look in the lost and found department it might be lying there.
I
can
be contacted
on 01234567890 whenever your team finds my file.
I
will myself
come
to
recieve
them.

I
would be
immensely
happy for your quick response.

Yours
thankfully
Nida
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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