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Your sister's getting married next week

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Dear Anna, How are you? I always hope that you are well. I am so glad heard that your sister’s wedding is getting in the next week. My all family excited about the wedding. Well, from my point of view, the wedding in my country are different. People attend the wedding usually wear gorgeous clothes. I saw varities of color, often is bright- that make people feel happier. And, there are many kind of food because nobody eats same food. We often eat vegetables, lean pork pie, soup, specially is chicken indispensable. I hope you enjoy the wedding. Give my wish to your sister, please. Yours friend, Tran Ngoc Huyen.
Dear Anna,

How are you? I always hope that you are well. I am
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glad heard that your sister’s
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is getting in the
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week. My all family excited about the
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wedding
. Well, from my point of view, the
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wedding
in my country are
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different
.
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People
attend the
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wedding
usually
wear gorgeous clothes. I
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saw
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varities
of color,
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often
is bright- that
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make
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people
feel happier. And, there are
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many kind
of food
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because
nobody eats same food. We
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often
eat vegetables, lean pork pie, soup,
specially
is chicken indispensable. I hope you enjoy the
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wedding
. Give my wish to your sister,
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please
.

Yours friend,

Tran
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Ngoc
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Huyen
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IELTS letter Your sister's getting married next week

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  American English
4 paragraphs
110 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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