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You should organize a celebration for your daughter's birthday party. So you invite the friends for the party

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Dear Lucy I am writing this letter personally to invite you and your family members to my daughter birthday party that will be held on 6 th February 2021. The party will begin at 4 p. m. in the restaurant " The King " a lot of entertainments such as variety shows, modern and classical music will be organized in it. I hope, you don't regret to visit the celebration. You shouldn't have too much trouble finding the restaurant, but here are a few directions so you don't get lost. Take A 440 road for Lewes and turn right at the roundabout where there is a sign post for Howstead. Drive through the town until you get to the post office, then turn left into Potter's Lane. The restaurant "The King" is on the right-hand side. Please confirm your availability on or before 4 th February by contacting us at 996243348. I am sure, you will be able to make it to our party. Looking forward to seeing you then. Love, Ann

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