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I should like to apply to be a member of your the languvige Institute.

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Dear sir Sulivan I'am very interesting in your advertisment in Aprel edition of local magazine Teching Professional and I shuld like to apply to be a member of your the Languvige Institute. I'am thirty -fayf years old and abtained a dag ree in Teching Spanish asa Fareign Language at Unversity of world Languages in 2015. I'am proctive and able to handle multipel tast's simultareously. I'am currently looking fora position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. In addition to this, I'am partience in - It SPANISH course. I'am enjoy several autdoor activities ang fudbol. I get along well with the kids. I'am makes the lectures very interesting if you would like meto attend. I'am would be able to come at ang time conveient to you, as I do want to be a member of your language Institute. I look forword to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully. Joney Def.
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Sulivan


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interesting in your
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advertisment
in
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Aprel
edition of local magazine
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Teching
Professional and I
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shuld
like to apply to be a member of your the
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Languvige
Institute.

I'am thirty
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-fayf
years
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and
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abtained
a dag
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ree
in
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Teching
Spanish
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asa
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Fareign
Language at
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Unversity
of world Languages in 2015. I'am
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proctive
and able to handle
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multipel
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tast
's
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simultareously
.
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I
'am
currently
looking
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fora
position that will
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allow
me to develop my
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skills
and experience.
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to this, I'am
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partience
in
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-
It SPANISH course. I'am enjoy several
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autdoor
activities ang
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fudbol
. I
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get
along well with the kids.
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I
'am
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makes
the lectures
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very
interesting if you would like
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meto
attend.
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I
'am would be able to
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come
at ang time
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conveient
to you, as I do want to be a member of your language Institute.
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I
look
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forword
to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
.

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Joney
Def.

IELTS letter I should like to apply to be a member of your the languvige Institute.

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5.0
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