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Dear Sir or Madam, I have learnt from your advertisement in newspaper about Intelligent Artificial course in Azure cloud. I am keen to learn it therefore, writing this mail for enquire more about it. I did computer engineering and looking for a job in top-notch multinational organization. Well, I have given a couple of interviews, but in this fast-paced technological era learning n having a cloud computing knowledge is essential. Therefore, I want to enroll myself for this course. from it, enhancement on various cloud computing could be possible. Eventually, it would increase chances to get better job and position. Thereby, I would like to ask few queries. First and foremost, about the form of classes, whether it would take online or offline classes? Moreover, please send me the details of fees structure and also requesting to provide dates when classes are going to start? I appriciate your valuable and quickest response soon, hence I could start course in very next month. Regards, Charmi.

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Regards,

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