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the board has decided to close cafe shop and opening a new fast food centre

the board has decided to close cafe shop and opening a new fast food centre BOyX

Dear Mr. Green, I am writing this letter with regards, and I want to mention a serious problem on this occasion. There was a piece of news flying in our college, that the management has decided to close the cafeteria and opening a new fast food center, which we have so many of them. I beg you behalf of our students not to shut down café shop. Firstly, we all know that how much essential of cafeteria in our college. Many of the students having habbit of drinking coffee and making fun-time with their besties in leisure period. Most of the people believe that caffeine helps to reduce the stress and make relief from tensions. On this occasion closing the café shop permanently which brings depression to our students. Secondly, there are lot of junk food centers in our aera, coming a new one which helps in increasing a count but not for any other useful purpose. However eating fast food was unhealthy and causes gastric problems In a nutshell, considering all this situations I strongly believe that cafeteria is pivotal than junk food center. Thankyou for spending your valuable time for reading this letter Yours faithfully sandeep

Dear Mr. Green,

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Yours faithfully


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