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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take BOyp
Dear Thomas, I want to apologize for the inconvenience caused to you that noise is coming from my flat. I will get to acknowledge this when you wrote me about this in the letter. I feel disheartened that you cause a problem due to my tenants. I was shifted to my hometown from the last 2 months. So for financial earning, I have given my flat to some college students. They were making noise by playing loud music till late at night. I was not aware that they were disturbing the neighborhood. When I get to know about this thing then immediately I called them and scolded them for their behavior. In addition, I also gave them a warning either to stop this behavior or find some other place to live in. Because to establish a good relationship with neighbors is good ethics and moral values. I can not go beyond this moral values for some amount of money. Thanks for keeping things in my notice. yours sincerly Ajay
Dear Thomas,

I want to apologize for the inconvenience caused to you that noise is coming from my flat. I will
get
to acknowledge this when you wrote me about this in the letter.
I
feel disheartened that you cause a problem due to my tenants.

I
was shifted
to my hometown from the last 2 months.
So
for financial earning, I have
given
my flat to
some
college students. They were making noise by playing loud music till late at night. I was not aware that they were disturbing the neighborhood.

When I
get
to know about this thing then immediately I called them and scolded them for their behavior.
In addition
, I
also
gave them a warning either to
stop
this behavior or find
some
other place to
live
in.
Because
to establish a
good
relationship with neighbors is
good
ethics and moral values. I can not go beyond this moral values for
some
amount of money. Thanks for keeping things in my notice.

yours
sincerly


Ajay
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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