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Dear Sir, I am Rachana Gohel, writing this letter in regard to your advertisement for people to do unpaid work at Hinduja Hospital.

Dear Sir, I am Rachana Gohel, writing this letter in regard to your advertisement for people to do unpaid work at Hinduja Hospital. AAb3
Dear Sir, I am Rachana Gohel, writing this letter in regard to your advertisement for people to do unpaid work at Hinduja Hospital. It is my immense pleasure to inform you that I am willing to volunteer for any sort of work in your hospital for free. I was glad to come across the advert, as I am fond of doing the social work lately. I am already registered with two NGOs and I am their active member, participating in most social events. Also, I have recently finished my Masters degree as Pathology Laboratory technician, which is an added advantage to your requirement. Considering my education credentials, I will look forward to work in the pathology department, if that is convenient from your side. I will be available to work at your hospital on weekends as my weekdays are engaged with other events. You can contact me through my mobile number as well as my E-mail address which are available on my enclosed visiting card. Waiting for your reply in anticipation. Yours Sincerely, Rachana
Dear Sir, I am
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Rachana
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Gohel
, writing this letter in regard to your advertisement for
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people
to do unpaid
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work
at
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Hinduja
Hospital. It is my immense pleasure to inform you that I am willing to volunteer for any sort of
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work
in your hospital for free. I was glad to
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come
across the advert, as I am fond of doing the social
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work
lately. I am already registered with two
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NGOs and
I am their active member, participating in most social
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events
.
Also
, I have recently finished my
For an academic degree, use "Master’s".
Masters
degree as Pathology Laboratory technician, which is an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
advantage to your requirement. Considering my education credentials, I will look forward to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in the pathology department, if
that is
convenient from your side. I will be available to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
at your hospital on weekends as my weekdays
are engaged
with other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
. You can contact me through my mobile number
as well
as my E-mail address which are available on my enclosed visiting card. Waiting for your reply in anticipation. Yours
Sincerely
,
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Rachana
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IELTS letter Dear Sir, I am Rachana Gohel, writing this letter in regard to your advertisement for people to do unpaid work at Hinduja Hospital.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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