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You have decided to reason from you work in order to try a new field.

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Dear sir, I am writing this letter inform you my decision to resign from multiple national company. I have received an offer from international company which is located in Dubai. This is great opportunity for me making career in this field. I do not want to leave this offer. Here I want explain my great experience this company which I spend five year. Its help to grow up my personality and boost my confidence. However I learned various theory. Now I feel upset because I am personally attached with this job. I never forget my gold period. I wanted small favor from you. I will require letter reference from you which I need at the time of joining the new workplace. The letter should my behaviour and make brief mention of my achievements. I am really thank you for your huge support for me. Your sincerely Jaspreet kaur
Dear sir, I am writing this letter inform you my decision to resign from multiple national
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I have received an offer from international
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
which
is located
in Dubai. This is great opportunity for me making career in this field. I do not want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
this offer. Here I want
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my great experience this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
which I spend five year. Its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to grow up my personality and boost my confidence.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
I learned various theory.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I feel upset
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I am
personally
attached with this job. I never forget my gold period. I wanted
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
favor from you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will require letter reference from you which I need at the time of joining the new workplace. The letter should my
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
and
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make
brief mention of my achievements. I am
really
Consider using a past participle here: "thanked".
thank
you for your huge support for me. Your
sincerely
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jaspreet
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
kaur

IELTS letter You have decided to reason from you work in order to try a new field.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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