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your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request you to reconsider your decision to shut down the sports and leisure centre in our neighbourhood. As I am a physical education trainer, I conduct practice sessions in boxing, cycling and swimming for my students at this sports complex. Also, many old people, including my parents engage in activities such as jogging here to become fit and healthy. Let me explain the importance of this sports centre. Since a lot of people come here to work out, it promotes their physical as well as mental well-being. Plus, children are able to play outdoor games which are extremely vital for boosting their physical strength and team skills. Although closing down the centre will help you save money, it will impact the health of our community members and make life boring for us. Also, women will be deprived of an opportunity to exercise in a safe and secure nearby area. I hope you will reconsider your decision for the welfare of the community. Yours faithfully, Aditya Jaitley
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request you to reconsider your decision to shut down the sports and leisure
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. Although closing down the
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life boring for us.

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of an opportunity to exercise in a safe and secure nearby area.

I hope you will reconsider your decision for the welfare of the community.

Yours
faithfully
,

Aditya
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Jaitley
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IELTS letter your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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