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College classes are too expensive. They should be affordable for all students.

College classes are too expensive. They should be affordable for all students. gWapL
College education is expensive and the cost is increasing every year. Many of students cannot afford to attend college and they have to take loans to get their college educations. The college students at least pay 40. 000$ for their loans. With this price every one cannot go to the college. After education, they may have a bachelor’s degree and find their first job, but they have debt for the 20 years. They are different way to make college more affordable. They can use the financial aid, scholarship and get a part time job to lower costs. They can also take online classes and take certificate instead of a degree.
College education is expensive and the cost is increasing every year.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
of students cannot afford to attend
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
college and
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take loans to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
their college educations. The college students at least pay 40.
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$000".
000$
for their loans. With this price every one cannot go to the college. After education, they may have a bachelor’s degree and find their
first
job,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they have debt for the 20 years. They are
Please check whether an article is missing: "a different".
different
way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
college more affordable. They can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the financial aid, scholarship and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
job to lower costs.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
They
can
also
take online classes and take certificate
instead
of a degree.
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IELTS letter College classes are too expensive. They should be affordable for all students.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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