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Write a letter to a friend who invited you to visit them in their country for the summer vacation.

Write a letter to a friend who invited you to visit them in their country for the summer vacation. lLwED
Dear Laura, Thanks a lot for your invitation to your stunning country. Well, it was a lovely surprise to get your letter. It sounds like I’m going to have a marvellous trip for the coming summer vacation. I’d be extremely delighted and can't wait anymore, actually. As you know, I’ve just gone through a truly difficult end-of-term exam and I haven’t gained the score as I expected even though I’ve made full efforts. So, I think it’ll be better if I go on this trip before returning to my study; hopefully, it'll give me a better mood. How about you? A lot of things have happened in three months, haven't they? By the way, let me know how we will get there. Why don’t we go sailing? Which place are we going to visit first? What’s more, I’m really keen on viewing the scenery which is said to be picturesque with lots of activities coming up. Anyway, many thanks for your great idea. Looking forward to seeing you then. Best wishes, Kate
Dear Laura,

Thanks a lot for your invitation to your stunning country. Well, it was a lovely surprise to
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get
your letter. It sounds like I’m going to have a
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marvellous
trip for the coming summer vacation. I’d be
extremely
delighted and can't wait anymore, actually.

As you know, I’ve
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just
gone through a
truly
difficult
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end
-of-term exam and I haven’t gained the score as I
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expected
even though
I’ve made full efforts.
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So
, I
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think
it’ll be better if I go on this trip
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before
returning to my study;
hopefully
, it'll give me a better mood. How about you?
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A lot of
things have happened in three months, haven't they?

By the way,
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let
me know how we will
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get
there. Why don’t we go sailing? Which place are we going to visit
first
? What’s more, I’m
really
keen on viewing the scenery which
is said
to be picturesque with lots of activities coming up.

Anyway,
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many
thanks for your great
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idea
. Looking forward to seeing you then.

Best wishes,

Kate
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who invited you to visit them in their country for the summer vacation.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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