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write an invitation to a friend to attend public event in your country

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Dearest friend Dave, How are you? I hope this letter finds you well and the pandemic situations became a bit better in your country. There is one exhibition which will be held coming month within my home country. I'd be delighted if you can come and join us for the event. Of course, you must stay with us during the vacation, will do all the required arrangements for you. This Science and Technology exhibition is one of the biggest public events in the UK, where we can learn about the latest advancements in different technologies. It'd be a great opportunity for research students like us to know about the past and ongoing research updates on our satellite communications domain. On the other hand, once you are here, will go on a tour to an island outside the city. There will be a lot of adventure activities like sky diving, bungee jump. I hope a person like you who enjoys adventurous activities will love this trip. Take care and write back soon. Best wishes, Venkatesh
Dearest friend Dave,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you well and the pandemic situations became a bit better in your country.

There is one exhibition which will
be held
coming month within my home country. I'd
be delighted
if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
us for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
.
Of course
, you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
stay with us during the vacation, will do all the required arrangements for you.

This Science and Technology exhibition is one of the biggest public
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
in the UK, where we can learn about the latest advancements in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
technologies. It'd be a great opportunity for research students like us to know about the past and ongoing research updates on our satellite communications domain.

On the other hand
, once you are here, will go on a tour to an island outside the city. There will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
adventure activities like
Did you mean "skydiving"?
sky diving
, bungee jump. I hope a person like you who enjoys adventurous activities will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
this trip.

Take care and write back
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best wishes,

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Venkatesh
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IELTS letter write an invitation to a friend to attend public event in your country

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  American English
8 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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